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A blog on my personal writing process. Just random thoughts, notes, and other stuff. Don’t know yet what that will be like. Am exploring possibilities and pulse towards an unknown future. Let’s find out! Here are challenges and activities stored.

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"Game of Thrones 2017
"The Soundtrack of Your Life 2020
"Resurrection Jukebox 2020
"NaNoWriMo Write-A-Thon 2020/21
"The Fiction Writer's Toolbox 2020
"October Novel Prep Challenge 2021(The Shanhaijing Prophecy)
Neil Gaiman's Masterclass 2019  
"a very Wodehouse challenge2024
Template Worldbuilding  2024
"Barrel of Monkeys [E] 2024

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September 30, 2024 at 6:24am
September 30, 2024 at 6:24am
#1077475
Day 10



Leonard Cohen with Waiting for the Miracle, 2015 from the album The Future (1992)

One of the most beautiful Love Songs. I listen to it often!

A moody epic about wasted opportunities that eat right into your soul. I believe the “miracle” the singer is waiting for is true love, and he has shot down chances at more earthbound romance along the way and now finds himself regretful, having “waited half my life away.” This is a great lyric from start to finish.

The last day of Barrel of Monkeys. I loved listening again to these great songs. Thank you Dr. Jeffyll, or Mr. Hyde?

Lyrics:

Baby, I've been waiting
I've been waiting night and day
I didn't see the time
Yeah I waited half my life away
There were lots of invitations
And I know you sent me some
But I was waiting
For the miracle, for the miracle to come

I know you really loved me
But, you see, my hands were tied
I know it must have hurt you
It must have hurt your pride
To have to stand beneath my window
With your bugle and your drum
And me I'm up there waiting
For the miracle, for the miracle to come

Ah I don't believe you'd like it
You wouldn't like it here
There ain't no entertainment
And the judgements are severe
The Maestro says it's Mozart
But it sounds like bubble gum
When you're waiting
For the miracle, for the miracle to come

Waiting for the miracle
There's nothing left to do
I haven't been this happy
Since the end of World War II

Nothing left to do
When you know that you've been taken
Nothing left to do
When you're begging for a crumb
Nothing left to do
When you've got to go on waiting
Waiting for the miracle to come

Yeah I dreamed about you, baby
It was just the other night
Most of you was naked
Ah but some of you was light
The sands of time were falling
From your fingers and your thumb
And you were waiting
For the miracle, for the miracle to come

Ah baby, let's get married
We've been alone too long
Let's be alone together
Let's see if we're that strong
Yeah let's do something crazy
Something absolutely wrong
While we're waiting
For the miracle, for the miracle to come

Nothing left to do
When you know you've been taken
Nothing left to do
When you're begging for a crumb
Nothing left to do
When you've got to go on waiting
Waiting for the miracle to come

When you've fallen on the highway
And you're lying in the rain
And they ask you how you're doing
Of course you'll say you can't complain --
If you're squeezed for information
That's when you've got to play it dumb:
You just say you're out there waiting
For the miracle, for the miracle to come
September 29, 2024 at 4:27am
September 29, 2024 at 4:27am
#1077422
Day 9



Leonard Cohen in First We Take Manhatten Live, 2017 also featured in the album:Famous Blue Raincoat, 1987.

Cohen explained himself in a backstage interview at 1988: "I think it means exactly what it says. It is a terrorist song. I think it's a response to terrorism. There's something about terrorism that I've always admired. He was charmed by extreme right rhetoric when he wrote the song.

I didn't know this. I've always been charmed by the extreme left rhetoric of the freedom fighters of earlier times, who sometimes turned out to be wrong indeed. Che Chevara, The IRA, etc. I was a lefty in my younger years. Now also still a tendency to the left.


Lyrics
They sentenced me to 20 years of boredom
For trying to change the system from within
I'm coming now, I'm coming to reward them
First we take Manhattan, then we take Berlin

I'm guided by a signal in the heavens (Guided, guided)
I'm guided by this birthmark on my skin (I am guided by)
I'm guided by the beauty of our weapons (Ooh, ooh)
First we take Manhattan, then we take Berlin

I'd really like to live beside you, baby
I love your body and your spirit and your clothes
But you see that line there moving through the station?
I told you, I told you, told you I was one of those
Ah, you loved me as a loser, but now you're worried that I just might win
You know the way to stop me, but you don't have the discipline
How many nights I prayed for this, to let my work begin
First we take Manhattan, then we take Berlin

I don't like your fashion business, mister
And I don't like these drugs that keep you thin
I don't like what happened to my sister
First we take Manhattan, then we take Berlin
I'd really like to live beside you, baby
I love your body and your spirit and your clothes
But you see that line there moving through the station?
I told you, I told you, told you I was one of those
And I thank you for those items that you sent me, ha ha ha ha
The monkey and the plywood violin
I practiced every night, now I'm ready
First we take Manhattan, then we take Berlin

I am guided
Ah, remember me, I used to live for music (Baby)
Remember me, I brought your groceries in (Ooh, baby, yeah)
Well, it's Father's Day, and everybody's wounded
First we take Manhattan, then we take Berlin

September 28, 2024 at 6:03am
September 28, 2024 at 6:03am
#1077375
Day 8



Leonard Cohen with Everybody Knows, live in London in 2019 and featured on the album I'm Your Man, 1988.

What does this song mean according to The American Songwriter?

"Cohen doesn’t waste any time with tact or restraint, setting the tone in his opening lines: “Everybody knows that the dice are loaded/Everybody rolls with their fingers crossed/Everybody knows that the war is over/Everybody knows the good guys lost.” This generalized overview soon gives way to more specific concerns, as the relentless lyrics touch on greed, racism and drugs. One verse seems to specifically reference the AIDS crisis, then at its height, as Cohen sings of a coming plague, meters to count sexual partners, and how “the naked man and woman/Are just a shining artifact of the past.”

Yet he also brings things down to a personal level with a verse about infidelity between two lovers. “Everybody knows that you’ve been faithful/Ah, give or take a night or two,” he sings. And it wouldn’t be a Cohen song if he didn’t bring spiritual concerns into it, with references to Calvary (juxtaposed ironically with Malibu beaches) and the Sacred Heart. Whether that heart belongs to Jesus or Leonard is never revealed, but, at the song’s end, it’s poised to explode all over the whole sordid scene.

Cohen also makes room for flashes of mischievous wit, like when he implies that the death of a parent and the death of a dog are equally disturbing. Running through this litany of horrors is a subtle criticism of those who ignore it all in favor of their own self-interested pursuits: “Everybody’s talking to their pockets/Everybody wants a box of chocolates/And a long-stemmed rose.”"

A beautiful but critical protest song!

Lyrics
Everybody knows that the dice are loaded
Everybody rolls with their fingers crossed
Everybody knows the war is over
Everybody knows the good guys lost
Everybody knows the fight was fixed
The poor stay poor, the rich get rich
That's how it goes

Everybody knows
Everybody knows that the boat is leaking
Everybody knows that the captain lied
Everybody got this broken feeling
Like their father or their dog just died
Everybody talking to their pockets
Everybody wants a box of chocolates
And a long-stem rose
Everybody knows
Everybody knows that you love me baby
Everybody knows that you really do
Everybody knows that you've been faithful
Ah, give or take a night or two

Everybody knows you've been discreet
But there were so many people you just had to meet
Without your clothes
And everybody knows
Everybody knows, everybody knows
That's how it goes
Everybody knows
Everybody knows, everybody knows
That's how it goes
Everybody knows

And everybody knows that it's now or never
Everybody knows that it's me or you
And everybody knows that you live forever
Ah, when you've done a line or two
Everybody knows the deal is rotten
Old Black Joe's still pickin' cotton
For your ribbons and bows
And everybody knows
And everybody knows that the Plague is coming
Everybody knows that it's moving fast
Everybody knows that the naked man and woman
Are just a shining artifact of the past

Everybody knows the scene is dead
But there's gonna be a meter on your bed
That will disclose
What everybody knows
And everybody knows that you're in trouble
Everybody knows what you've been through
From the bloody cross on top of Calvary
To the beach of Malibu

Everybody knows it's coming apart
Take one last look at this Sacred Heart
Before it blows
And everybody knows
Everybody knows, everybody knows
That's how it goes

Everybody knows
Everybody knows, everybody knows
That's how it goes
Everybody knows
Everybody knows, everybody knows
That's how it goes
Everybody knows
Everybody knows

September 27, 2024 at 5:14am
September 27, 2024 at 5:14am
#1077340
Day 7



Leonard Cohen with Show Me the Place, 2012
on the album Old Ideas, 2012

It hit me hard last night. Hurricane Helene hit Florida in the US and a few WdC writers were caught in the middle. This song kinda reminded me of disaster and mayhem and suffering.

Lyrics

[Verse 1]
Show me the place where you want your slave to go
Show me the place, I've forgotten, I don't know
Show me the place, for my head is bendin' low
Show me the place where you want your slave to go

[Verse 2]
Show me the place, help me roll away the stone
Show me the place, I can't move this thing alone
Show me the place where the word became a man
Show me the place where the suffering began

[Bridge]
The troubles came, I saved what I could save
A thread of light, a particle, a wave
But there were chains, so I hastened to behave
There were chains, so I loved you like a slave

[Verse 1]
Show me the place where you want your slave to go
Show me the place, I've forgotten, I don't know
Show me the place, for my head is bendin' low
Show me the place where you want your slave to go

[Instrumental Break]

[Bridge]
The troubles came, I saved what I could save
A thread of light, a particle, a wave
But there were chains, so I hastened to behave
There were chains, so I loved you like a slave

[Verse 3]
Show me the place
Show me the place
Show me the place
Mmm, mmm

[Verse 2]
Show me the place, help me roll away the stone
Show me the place, I can't move this thing alone
Show me the place where the word became a man
Show me the place where the suffering began
September 26, 2024 at 11:04am
September 26, 2024 at 11:04am
#1077310
Day 6



Leonard Cohen, In My Secret Life, 2022
on the album Halleluya & Songs from his albums, 2022

"I cheat and I lie", triggered me today.

I stopped smoking on January 1 of this year but bought a package of cigarettes. Smoked one so far. I am cheating on myself. I don't like it at all but it happened.

After this, I quit!!!

Lyrics

In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life

I saw you this morning
You were moving so fast
Can’t seem to loosen my grip
Well on the past
And I miss you so much
There’s no one in sight
And we’re still making love
In my secret life
In my secret life

I smile when I’m angry
I cheat and I lie
I do what I have to do
To get by
But I know what is wrong
And I know what is right
And I’d die for the truth
In my secret life
In my secret life

Hold on, hold on, my brother
My sister, hold on tight
I finally got my orders
I’ll be marching through the morning
Marching through the night
Moving cross the borders
Of my secret life

Looked through the paper
Makes you want to cry
Nobody cares if the people
Live or die
And the dealer wants you thinking
That it’s either black or white
Thank God it’s not that simple
In my secret life

I bite my lip
I buy what I’m told:
From the latest hit
To the wisdom of old
But I’m always alone
And my heart is like ice
And it’s crowded and cold
In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life
In my secret life

September 25, 2024 at 6:18am
September 25, 2024 at 6:18am
#1077256
Day 5



Leonard Cohen with Famous Blue Raincoat, 1971
on the Album Songs of Love and Hate, 1971

It's a very soft and slow song. Cohen is reading a letter to a man and a woman.

It reminds me of all the years I was part and still am, of a penpal site. For 17 years now, I guess. Sometimes I was lucky for great contacts, most of the people reacting don't read and write well. I click them away instantly. A waist of my time.

This is a beautiful letter.

[Verse 1]
It's four in the morning, the end of December
I'm writing you now just to see if you're better
New York is cold, but I like where I'm living
There's music on Clinton Street all through the evening
I hear that you're building your little house deep in the desert
You're living for nothing now, I hope you're keeping some kind of record

[Chorus]
Yes, and Jane came by with a lock of your hair
She said that you gave it to her
That night that you planned to go clear
Did you ever go clear?

[Verse 2]
Oh, the last time we saw you you looked so much older
Your famous blue raincoat was torn at the shoulder
You'd been to the station to meet every train
Then you came home without Lili Marlene
And you treated my woman to a flake of your life
And when she came back, she was nobody's wife

[Chorus 2]
Well, I see you there with the rose in your teeth
One more thin gypsy thief
Well I see Jane's awake
She sends her regards

[Verse 3]
And what can I tell you my brother, my killer?
What can I possibly say?
I guess that I miss you. I guess I forgive you
I'm glad you stood in my way
If you ever come by here for Jane or for me
Well, your enemy is sleeping and his woman is free

[Chorus]
Yes, and thanks for the trouble
You took from her eyes
I thought it was there for good
So I never tried
And Jane came by with a lock of your hair
She said that you gave it to her
That night that you planned to go clear
Sincerely, L. Cohen
September 24, 2024 at 1:57am
September 24, 2024 at 1:57am
#1077211
Day 4



Take This Waltz, 1988 Leonard Cohen
on the album I'm Your Man, 1988

This is a great song while drinking alcohol and becoming a little tipsy. Cohen's voice is beautiful, strong, warm, and full of life.

Because of the title, it reminds me of Travelin' Waltz who is currently in Paris, France. I hope he has a great time, enjoying the city, the language, the beverages, and the Parisiens. Good luck in this wonderful city! Cohen is with you.

Lyrics
Now in Vienna there's ten pretty women
There's a shoulder where Death comes to cry
There's a lobby with nine hundred windows
There's a tree where the doves go to die
There's a piece that was torn from the morning
And it hangs in the Gallery of Frost

Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay
Take this waltz, take this waltz
Take this waltz with the clamp on it's jaws

Oh I want you, I want you, I want you
On a chair with a dead magazine
In the cave at the tip of the lily
In some hallway where love's never been
On a bed where the moon has been sweating
In a cry filled with footsteps and sand

Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay
Take this waltz, take this waltz
Take its broken waist in your hand

This waltz, this waltz, this waltz, this waltz
With it's very own breath of brandy and Death
Dragging it's tail in the sea

There's a concert hall in Vienna
Where your mouth had a thousand reviews
There's a bar where the boys have stopped talking
They've been sentenced to death by the blues
Ah, but who is it climbs to your picture
With a garland of freshly cut tears?

Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay
Take this waltz, take this waltz
Take this waltz it's been dying for years

There's an attic where children are playing
Where I've got to lie down with you soon
In a dream of Hungarian lanterns
In the mist of some sweet afternoon
And I'll see what you've chained to your sorrow
All your sheep and your lilies of snow

Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay
Take this waltz, take this waltz
With its "I'll never forget you, you know!"

This waltz, this waltz, this waltz, this waltz ...
With its very own breath of brandy and death
Dragging its tail in the sea
And I'll dance with you in Vienna
I'll be wearing a river's disguise
The hyacinth wild on my shoulder
My mouth on the dew of your thighs
And I'll bury my soul in a scrapbook
With the photographs there, and the moss
And I'll yield to the flood of your beauty
My cheap violin and my cross
And you'll carry me down on your dancing
To the pools that you lift on your wrist

Oh my love, Oh my love
Take this waltz, take this waltz
It's yours now. It's all that there is

Instrumental

(Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay)

September 23, 2024 at 7:19am
September 23, 2024 at 7:19am
#1077173
Day 3



1988 I'm Your Man, Leonard Cohen
on I'm you're man, 1988

The lyrics remind me of Joep, a children's actor and writing teacher. (1990-ish). I met Joep in a theater writing class and fell for him. We had a thing for almost a year in which he even proposed to marry him. My first and only time somebody asked. I said No.

He was very funny, witty and fun to be with. And the intimacy was great. But suddenly there was nothing left, it died between us, dried up. So, I broke up with him. He was 15 years older.

Lyrics:

If you want a lover
I'll do anything you ask me to
And if you want another kind of love
I'll wear a mask for you
If you want a partner
Take my hand
Or if you want to strike me down in anger
Here I stand
I'm your man

If you want a boxer
I will step into the ring for you
And if you want a doctor
I'll examine every inch of you
If you want a driver
Climb inside
Or if you want to take me for a ride
You know you can
I'm your man

Ah, the moon's too bright
The chain's too tight
The beast won't go to sleep
I've been running through these promises to you
That I made and I could not keep
Ah but a man never got a woman back
Not by begging on his knees
Or I'd crawl to you baby
And I'd fall at your feet
And I'd howl at your beauty
Like a dog in heat
And I'd claw at your heart
And I'd tear at your sheet
I'd say please (Please)
I'm your man

And if you've got to sleep
A moment on the road
I will steer for you
And if you want to work the street alone
I'll disappear for you
If you want a father for your child
Or only want to walk with me a while
Across the sand
I'm your man

If you want a lover
I'll do anything that you ask me to
And if you want another kind of love
I'll wear a mask for you

September 22, 2024 at 12:11am
September 22, 2024 at 12:11am
#1077112
Day 2



Who by Fire, 1974 Leonard Cohen, on the album New Skin for the Old Ceremony, 1974

It's a song for Spring and Summer. This song delves into the complexities of mortality and the struggle to find meaning in life.

I think this song hurt me in the first place after a breakup with my boyfriend. I was fifteen and devastated.

I remember listening to this music while I left the curtains of my bedroom open because I hoped he came by on his bike and would see me in my room. I wrote in my diary. I sighed, and I was sad!

After a few months, we got back together again, but it never was the same after that. So, within a few months, I was the one breaking up. Under the voice of Leonard Cohen.

Lyrics:

And who by fire, who by water
Who in the sunshine, who in the night time
Who by high ordeal, who by common trial
Who in your merry merry month of May
Who by very slow decay
And who shall I say is calling?

And who in her lonely slip, who by barbiturate
Who in these realms of love, who by something blunt
And who by avalanche, who by powder
Who for his greed, who for his hunger
And who shall I say is calling?

And who by brave assent, who by accident
Who in solitude, who in this mirror
Who by his lady's command, who by his own hand
Who in mortal chains, who in power
And who shall I say is calling?

September 21, 2024 at 4:54pm
September 21, 2024 at 4:54pm
#1077092
Day 1

Today, September 21 was the birthdate of Leonard Cohen. He died in 2016, 5 months after my start at WdC. I love his lyrics as a poet, and I love his music and his voice. So, for this challenge of 10 days, I choose him.

I think I was in my teens when I discovered Cohen's music while staying in the apartment of my mother's younger brother and his young wife. I listened to his album which was called Raisor Music because of the deep sad voice and the lyrics. Critics would say it was music to kill yourself by.



Leonard Cohen, 1976 album Songs of Leonard Cohen

"Suzanne."

The text is sad, deep, profound and so beautiful. I could listen to "Suzanne" over and over again. It never got tired or dull. When I was in my teens (15-16) I was religious so it touched that part of my soul as well. Within a few years I dropped that but the love of "Suzanne" remained.

"Suzanne takes you down to her place near the river
You can hear the boats go by
You can spend the night beside her
And you know that she's half crazy
But that's why you want to be there
And she feeds you tea and oranges
That come all the way from China
And just when you mean to tell her
That you have no love to give her
Then she gets you on her wavelength
And she lets the river answer
That you've always been her lover

And you want to travel with her
And you want to travel blind
And you know that she will trust you
For you've touched her perfect body with your mind

And Jesus was a sailor
When he walked upon the water
And he spent a long time watching
From his lonely wooden tower
And when he knew for certain
Only drowning men could see him
He said "All men will be sailors then
Until the sea shall free them"
But he himself was broken
Long before the sky would open
Forsaken, almost human
He sank beneath your wisdom like a stone

And you want to travel with him
And you want to travel blind
And you think maybe you'll trust him
For he's touched your perfect body with his mind

Now Suzanne takes your hand
And she leads you to the river
She is wearing rags and feathers
From Salvation Army counters
And the sun pours down like honey
On Our Lady of the Harbour
And she shows you where to look
Among the garbage and the flowers
There are heroes in the seaweed
There are children in the morning
They are leaning out for love
And they will lean that way forever
While Suzanne holds the mirror

And you want to travel with her
And you want to travel blind
And you know you can trust her
For she's touched your perfect body with her mind"



September 2, 2024 at 7:36am
September 2, 2024 at 7:36am
#1076080


Prompt 14: Write an acrostic poem about Jane Austen.

Jane Austen

Jane Austen
Austen, Jane
Now starring in this poem
Emma, a great story
And Pride and Prejudice
Under the stars of romance
Singeling out strong women
To tell a compelling tale
English novelist, wote 6
Novels, Jane Austen

LC:10
September 2, 2024 at 4:32am
September 2, 2024 at 4:32am
#1076069


Prompt 13: Write what you like about the novel Emma.

I have read the book Emma by Jane Austen a long time ago. Perhaps twenty-five or thirty years ago. So, I cannot remember much and don't have the book at home. So all depends on me doing research and Google. A week's deadline is also too short to deliver the book from the library. It'll have to do.

I remember liking the book because Emma is an independent young, rich woman who doesn't want to commit her life to a man and marry, at first. It is a bit of a feminist and psychological novel. She thinks she is good at matchmaking and meddling in other people's love life. At the end of the book, she falls for the man she put up a female friend with.

Something like that.

WC: 592 characters/120 words

September 2, 2024 at 4:10am
September 2, 2024 at 4:10am
#1076067


Prompt 11: Does any of Downton Abbey's male characters make for a good Darcy? Gay Thomas Barrow, Tom Branson, or Matthew Crawley?

Downton Abbey is a British historical drama television series set in the early 20th century. The series, set on the fictional Yorkshire country estate of Downton Abbey between 1912 and 1926, depicts the lives of the aristocratic Crawley family and their domestic servants in the post-Edwardian era, and the effects the great events of the time have on their lives and the British social hierarchy. (Wikipedia). I binge-watched the whole series and the movie.

Fitzwilliam Darcy is a very arrogant man of England's upper crust. He is lord of Pemberley, an expensive estate in the county of Derbyshire. He is fairly tall and handsome, but his demeanor is unfriendly, aloof, and unapproachable. In the book Pride and Prejudice Jane Austen describes him as a very disagreeable man, but as the book progresses he is loving and kind. Mr. Darcy struggles with pride and prejudice towards those of lower social standing, especially those who lack propriety.

That's when Tom Branson of Downton Abbey comes in. He too has issues with social standing marrying Sybil who is upper class and juggling his job as a chauffeur and journalist.

I think the only Downton Abbey character that would make a good Mr. Darcey would be Tom Branson. Thomas Barrow is too sinister and Matthew Crawley is too kind. All three of them are in their own way good looking.

When I ponder this question long enough, I also tend to look at Thomas Barrow again. So, I am conflicted. Tom or Thomas?





WC: 1325 characters/271 words
September 1, 2024 at 1:06pm
September 1, 2024 at 1:06pm
#1076024


Jane Austen Writing Challenge by Princess Morticia Megan Rose

1. "Jane Austen Writing Challenge [ASR] Pick 3 challenges > 250 characters

Prompt 11: Does any of Downton Abbey's male characters make for a good Darcy? Gay Thomas Barrow, Tom Branson, or Matthew Crawley?
Prompt 13: Write what you like about the novel Emma.
Prompt 14: Write an acrostic poem about Jane Austen. To be fair, in the Jane Austen August 2019 Newsletter, I am offering a Jane Austen Merit Badge of your choice if you do this challenge. The same rule applies here.

2. "Jane Austen Newsletters Folder 2 [E] Do 2 reviews > 500 characters

"Jane Austen Newsletter January , 2024 [E]
"Jane Austen House News May 2024 [E]

Information

Jane Austen Brittanica (https://www.britannica.com/biography/Jane-Austen)
Jane Austen Website (https://janeausten.co.uk/)
Emma Brittanica (https://www.britannica.com/topic/Emma-novel-by-Austen)
Thomas Barrow (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZfiPulfalLg) sinister character
Tom Branson (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zwE5t8uYn8Q) Full of pride in the beginning
Matthew Crawley (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lZEldQZNG1g&t=43s) Too nice and kind

Deadline Wodehouse Challenge 2024: September 7th 11.59 pm WdC time.

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September 1, 2024 at 11:30am
September 1, 2024 at 11:30am
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October 28, 2021 at 12:26pm
October 28, 2021 at 12:26pm
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Oct. 30: - CONTEST ROUND: Plot Background Story ▼

Write a story that sets up your plot. EXAMPLE: The Lord of the Rings story revolves around the One Ring, its significance, and how it's destroyed. But how did Frodo get the One Ring in the first place? We learn that in The Hobbit. You obviously can't write a full-scale novel in 15 minutes, but you could write the scene where Bilbo encounters Gollum and stumbles across the ring. That would be a background story that sets up the plot in Lord of the Rings.

*Contest Round entries may be any rating. Follow these instructions ("IMPORTANT: How to compete in a Contest Round" ) by 1200 noon WDC time on Sunday to compete. WDC time is New York City time and can be found at the top of the IM Console. If you miss this deadline or choose not to compete, you must still log the assignment complete (without linking your work) for the grand prize, per the standard Prep guidelines.


Scene: Where did the Book Shanhaijing come from; how did it end up at the auction?
(15 minutes, with an alarm clock.)

A pair of eyes squinted through the living room, a face hidden with a black ninja mask, an agile person maneuvering through the dark mansion.

It was the house of a private collector of beautiful Asian nicknacks, but the figure was only interested in the spacious bookcase at the end. He opened its doors and took out some books when his eyes fell on the small manuscript on the middle of the shelf. Shanhaijing. He whispered its name softly before taking the precious Book into his gloved hands.

This was what he came for; this was his price. When the alarm went off, he already was miles away, driving his car towards the harbor. He had a plan of action to hide the Book.

Arriving near the container ship, he managed to get on board unseen and walked to the space where a few wooden crates were lined up. One of them was still open, the wooden plate to close it standing near the chest. It contained old books, and the thief put his stolen manuscript between the other books with a smile. Nobody would know the difference. Then he nailed the cover on top and looked for the stamp with the address. It was a utility shop in a big city in the United States, Los Angeles. He made a mental note of the address and left as he came. His job was done.

That night at 3 am. the big steamer left on the Yangzi River in China. It would take a few months before it arrived at its destination. Everything was set in place!




October 27, 2021 at 12:42pm
October 27, 2021 at 12:42pm
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Oct. 29: - Plot: Premise Revision ▼

Now that you have spent a month planning your novel, revise your initial premise. Identify the following:

(1) Setting(s). Where does your story take place?
(2) Protagonist(s). Who is(are) your main character(s)?
(2b) Flaw(s). What is(are) the protagonist's major flaw(s)?
(2c) Goal(s). What does(d) the protagonist(s) want (or want to avoid)?
(3) Conflict(s). What's keeping them from their goal(s)?
(4) Antagonist(s). Who or what is creating the conflict(s)?
(5) Resolution. How does it all turn out in the end?
(6) Theme: What is the theme or moral of the story?
(7) Outline: Update your outline as needed.


(1) Los Angeles, USA; Beijing, China; inside the Book Shanhaijing
(2) Wolf Meyer and Poppy Ryan aka Yuang, the Fish Woman
Too trusty; he wants to understand the mystery and save Los Angeles
(3) The Book Shanhaijing, three monsters, and Poppy.
(4) The four monsters described in the Book Shanhaijing
(5) The monsters are destroyed, the riddle is solved, and Los Angeles is saved.
(6) Never trust a monster; […]
(7) Outline: Bike courier and male escort Wolf meets Poppy, a journalist, at an auction where he purchases an ancient Chinese Book. Mysterious events happen, and they travel to Beijing, China, to investigate with the help of Professor Xiao. 2020-year-old monsters appear from the Book, and by fighting them, Wolf solves a riddle that can save Los Angeles from harm and devastation. Then Poppy and the Book disappear. She played him all along and is one of the monsters herself. She goes for absolute power and the kill. Will Wolf survive and rescue LA?




October 27, 2021 at 12:24pm
October 27, 2021 at 12:24pm
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Oct. 28: - Character: Protagonist Interview ▼

You are a journalist. The story of your novel is complete. Interview your protagonist and ask the following questions:
(1) How is life for you now, compared to life prior to these events?
(2) How did the events of your story change you?


(1)Wolf Meyer:

"Life is so much better now. I have learned a lot from those adventures. Like that, I can fight off creepy monsters, solve a difficult riddle and save a whole city in the process. I also was very troubled by the betrayal of Poppy. She was definitely not the person I thought she was. She deceived me big time, but I got even with her at the end, which felt very satisfactory. Things are looking good at the romantic front right now, as well. So, I am a happy man!"

(2) "I learned not to be that trusty in the beginning when I meet new people. It is best to look at things from a distance first before jumping into a relationship. Otherwise, you can get burned. But I am more confident now, much more at ease with myself. The Shanhaijing Prophecies have taught me that."




October 27, 2021 at 5:10am
October 27, 2021 at 5:10am
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Oct. 27: - General: Freestyle Brainstorm, World Building or Research ▼

(1) Spend at least fifteen minutes clarifying things through ""What If"" brainstorming, mind mapping (see resources at the bottom of the calendar), freestyle writing, lists, drawings or research. You may also choose to use this time to finish a previous assignment that needs more time.

(2) Update your characters, definitions and settings lists as needed.


Freestyle writing for 15 minutes, with the alarm clock.

Ch 1 Introduction Wolf’s night job
Ch 2 At the auction
Ch 3 Buying the Book
Ch 4 Meeting Poppy
Ch 5 Relationship progresses
Ch 6 Strange phenomenons occurring
Ch 7 Dog and cat
Ch 8 It’s the Book
Ch 9 Winning the lottery
Ch 10 Going to China
Ch 11 Beijing
Ch 12 The meet with professor Xiao
Ch 13 Translating Shanhaijing
Ch 14 Meeting the monsters
Ch 15 Fighting the monsters
Ch 16 Shanhaijing in action
Ch 17 The riddle
Ch 18 Winning from the monsters
Ch 19 Back in Los Angeles
Ch 20 Danger
Ch 21 Book and Poppy disappear
Ch 22 What to do next?
Ch 23 Fighting the fish woman Poppy
Ch 24 Is there time enough?
Ch 25 Solving the riddle
Ch 26 Shanhaijing in action again
Ch 27 Saving Los Angeles
Ch 28 Welcome back!
Ch 29 New prospects
Ch 30 The End





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