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 |   I've got the words, if you've got the time.
Gimme your best Para/Poem. |
Oh, I really like this, but it seems to fall apart in the third verse. Not completely apart. The meaning comes through, but the rhythm doesn't work. There's a minor blip in the rhythm in line 6, too. That doesn't jar me though. I like that verse 3 doesn't seem to be the same rhythm as the first two verses, but that makes me want it to hold together better, be a clear rhythm in itself. Again, I really like this a lot. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Everything hangs on words, including ourselves. Often we only learn what we think -- and who we are -- when we write. -- Roger Rosenblatt, Family University Professor in Writing |
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