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Mar 31, 2020 at 11:58am
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Re: Re: Back to the drama
All, right. Here's where things stand.

I managed to write three versions so far. And none of them are making me any happier.

There are two key problems. The first is that I want to give you something new, but in doing so Will sometimes finds himself displaced from the interesting drama. That's not insurmountable, but it is an issue.

The second is bigger. The enemy have one problem they can't solve which puts a ticking clock on them (Kristen, disguised as Abi, is absent, and Chris and Todd will assume that Will has kidnapped her; they believe they need to get her back); and second, there is one item that is incredibly powerful and, if used incorrectly, grants Will an instant ally (the golemized mask of Abi that Vee confiscated).

These two guns could misfire at any moment, but to keep with Seuzz's rules about consistency within plotlines, whatever choice Will makes, these two problems are going to get resolved or not resolved in all lines. And I'll be damned if I can resolve them in a way that is satisfying.

There's got to be an answer, and I know I am clawing around it. But right now... ARGH!
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