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Genre(s): Fantasy • None • None Type: Short Story Request Details: Looking for overall reviews! Would love feedback on characters, worldbuilding, and the writing style in particular. Thanks in advance!
Not reviewed posted: Nov 20, 2024 Genre(s): Religious • Opinion • None Type: Poetry Request Details: This is experimental and I am looking for constructive comments on both its form and content. It is simply my vision of what a second may be like.
Not reviewed posted: Nov 19, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Sci-fi • Action/Adventure Type: Short Story Request Details: Loonic and Avvia are Young Ones on a quest to get to The Power of Life and Death before some Blade Warriors. The only Young Ones who can probably stop these Blade Warriors from getting there first are Blade Experts Brodim and Taarina.
Not reviewed posted: Nov 11, 2024 Genre(s): Personal • Writing • Death Type: Poetry Request Details: Seeking honest and constructive feedback.
Not reviewed posted: Nov 11, 2024 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Nonsense • None Type: Short Story Request Details: Hey, I'm looking for reviews on this short story I wrote after staying up too late. Thank you.
Not reviewed posted: Nov 9, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • None • None Type: Fiction Request Details: Honest and helpful feedback please
Not reviewed posted: Oct 23, 2024 Genre(s): Dark • Experience • Romance/Love Type: Novel Request Details: an unfinished novel made up of diary entry of a boy in the 60s as he comes to fall in love with his best friend and a bunch of sad,dark,and messed up stuff happens
Not reviewed posted: Oct 17, 2024 Genre(s): Writing • None • None Type: Fiction Request Details: Looking for an honest critique.
Not reviewed posted: Oct 13, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Mystery • Romance/Love Type: Novel Request Details: A complete romance/mystery seeking reviews. There is an Auto-Reward of 1,000 GPs for reviews and comments per chapter (39 plus an epilogue). I always reward more for useful and in-depth reviews. Thanks in advance.
Not reviewed posted: Oct 1, 2024 Genre(s): Erotica • Romance/Love • Drama Type: Preface Request Details: This is intended to be a prologue or preface to my novel. I wanted it to have some erotica in the story's theme but more on the romantic side with emotional closeness and involvement. This moment is supposed to be a highlighted moment between them.
Not reviewed posted: Sep 24, 2024 Genre(s): Crime/Gangster • Detective • Drama Type: Chapter Request Details: Chapter one of a murder case.
Not reviewed posted: Sep 14, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Horror/Scary • Occult Type: Fiction Request Details: Finally finished. Added section 15 and 16. Scenes aren't in Chrono order, but as I think explains stuff. Love to hear your impressions.
Not reviewed posted: Sep 14, 2024 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Action/Adventure • Thriller/Suspense Type: Short Story Request Details: These seven planets are under the control of Juanin and Noorva. That leaves three more uninhabited planets in this Group of Planets they want to control. Before they can start populating these planets, there are some problems they must solve first.
Not reviewed posted: Sep 10, 2024 Genre(s): Western • Crime/Gangster • Action/Adventure Type: Short Story Request Details: I am 2 and a half chapters into my train robbery story. I would like other's feedback on dialogue, pacing etc. I haven't been writing for long, this is my first attempt, actually. I have had no training. I just read a ton of action-adventure stories.
Not reviewed posted: Sep 10, 2024 Genre(s): Community • Contest Entry • Writing.Com Type: Non-fiction Request Details: Without Writing.com Life would be impossible. Like a black hole. What if?
Not reviewed posted: Sep 6, 2024 Genre(s): Dark • Horror/Scary • Paranormal Type: Short Story Request Details: hello! i wrote this recently a few months ago after a bout of writer's block, so parts of this may be a tad stilted, but honest reviews will be majorly appreciated! i want to get back into writing more seriously :)
Not reviewed posted: Sep 6, 2024 Genre(s): Mythology • Inspirational • Community Type: Poetry Request Details: Please review, will be worth your time!
Not reviewed posted: Sep 3, 2024 Genre(s): Nature • Spiritual • Romance/Love Type: Poetry Request Details: His floral devotion to Mother lives on. Her crooked smile hung upside down. Mother couldn't right her happy frown.
Not reviewed posted: Aug 30, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • None • None Type: Chapter Request Details: Anything goes critique! I'm looking to improve my writing style, and I believe this was a good second step to take.
Not reviewed posted: Aug 23, 2024 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Inspirational • Death Type: Prose Request Details: In a battle-hardened lost colony named Larrikesh, Caleb meets an urban legend on a mission from the Stars. In the few days he has left, can he help Scarlett learn the lesson she thinks she is sent to teach?
Not reviewed posted: Aug 20, 2024 Genre(s): Contest Entry • Relationship • Family Type: Short Story Request Details: This is a entry for a Prompt Contest based on "What If?" Looking for some suggestions and helpful remarks. I made this with a writing style I've been recently using. I don't know if it's any good or if my previous writing style was better.
Not reviewed posted: Aug 17, 2024 Genre(s): Writing • Experience • How-To/Advice Type: Poetry Request Details: Please be as thorough and honest as you can. I am not afraid of constructive criticism.
Not reviewed posted: Aug 14, 2024 Genre(s): Biographical • Animal • Satire Type: Non-fiction Request Details: Would you mind reviewing my newest item?
Not reviewed posted: Aug 11, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Action/Adventure • Detective Type: Novel Request Details: Liam is a new comer to the island , he finds himself in a bind with a missing child case. In the process he finds love that he never could have imagined. This is first try for me at writing romance. I just need an honest review.
Not reviewed posted: Aug 11, 2024 Genre(s): Business • Technology • History Type: Other Request Details: I want critique on the article I'm trying to write that may be going in a public newsletter. It may be "out of chronological order" already. I labeled this a "private for my eyes only" so if it doesn't appear to you, I will need to change it to what???
Not reviewed posted: Aug 7, 2024 Genre(s): Children's • Family • Emotional Type: Novella Request Details: I'm looking for someone willing to spare time to give some honest feedback so I can improve this chapter of my novel :)
Not reviewed posted: Aug 3, 2024 Genre(s): Emotional • Biographical • Experience Type: Poetry Request Details: An emotional piece for me. Rated XGC, and may not be something you would enjoy reading. It offers a small glimpse into my past
Not reviewed posted: Jul 26, 2024 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Teen • Supernatural Type: Fiction Request Details: Looking for critiques on how I can improve my writing and storytelling.
Not reviewed posted: Jul 24, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Emotional • Entertainment Type: Short Story Request Details: Please review my short story and give me some feedback. Thank you so much!
Not reviewed posted: Jul 21, 2024 Genre(s): Psychology • Paranormal • Drama Type: Short Story Request Details: Jacob extended his arms towards the echoing object, which seemed to be within reach, but he was unable to touch it. His eyes were riveted on his arms, which stretched upwards against the wall. A shiver went down his spine as he noticed how filthy he was.
Not reviewed posted: Jul 12, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Sports • Other Type: Novel Request Details: This is the first 2 chapters of my novel. Looking for any constructive comments good or bad. Thank you
Not reviewed posted: Jul 7, 2024 Genre(s): Biographical • Writing • Experience Type: Chapter Request Details: Started writing a memoir about my journey to achieving my dreams. It's still rough and this is only 1 segment of it. I want to flesh it out, put it chronologically, at some point. But as a late night musing...I'm wondering if it's any good.
Not reviewed posted: Jul 1, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Friendship • Action/Adventure Type: Collection Request Details: These stories are my first attempt at a fantasy series. I know that they are both long but would love to hear what you think. Blessings and thank you - Moonie
Not reviewed posted: Jul 1, 2024 Genre(s): Horror/Scary • Dark • Ghost Type: Short Story Request Details: It is said that the old man Hoffman's house is haunted, but Lucas doesn't let that stop him from exploring the place. Looking for opinions on plot, dialogue, flow, mood, and whatever catches your eye enough to make a comment about.
Not reviewed posted: Jun 6, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Mystery • Other Type: Chapter Request Details: The first two chapters in an epic fantasy novel. Bit of a slower starter, but I've tried to pack it full of atmosphere and mystery. Does it still entertain? How immersed and invested were you?
Not reviewed posted: Jun 3, 2024 Genre(s): Children's • Family • Friendship Type: Fiction Request Details: The latest draft of my manuscript. It has gone through many revisions and edits based on the great feedback I've received here, as well as from other sources. Did I finally get it right? Thanks in advance! Roy
Not reviewed posted: May 27, 2024 Genre(s): Fantasy • Action/Adventure • Writing.Com Type: Fiction Request Details: I wrote a short story. It has a dragon in it. Let me know how I did. All feedback welcome and super appreciated!
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Horror/Scary • Mythology • Adult Type: Novel Request Details: A scary story. Please review and analyse the storyline and how I can improve it (somehow)?
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Comedy • Other Type: Draft Request Details: I wrote this and I would like some analysis on the humour and the storyline, since it's supposed to be a comedic short I wrote!
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Drama • LGBTQ+ Type: Short Story Request Details: Super nervous about this! I've wanted to write it for years, but it's such a delicate subject. Does it work within the word count? Is it impactful, respectful, understandable, trite, predictable? Just in time for Pride. Any feedback greatly appreciated.
Not reviewed posted: May 23, 2024 Genre(s): Personal • Emotional • Tribute Type: Other Request Details: I would appreciate it if you reviewed this piece. I was trying to go for an epic that left someone thinking about it for a while afterwards. Hope it's up to standards.
Not reviewed posted: May 15, 2024 Genre(s): Animal • Children's • Other Type: Poetry Request Details: A fun poem about my love for guinea pigs. Did I get the punctuation right?
Not reviewed posted: May 13, 2024 Genre(s): Emotional • Relationship • Dark Type: Poetry Request Details: Haven't been on here for a while, coming back with a stream-of-consciousness prose poem. Any reviews appreciated! Thank you
Not reviewed posted: Apr 29, 2024 Genre(s): Other • Opinion • Personal Type: Essay Request Details: I would love to hear your thoughts on this.
Not reviewed posted: Apr 11, 2024 Genre(s): Writing • Other • Other Type: Short Story Request Details: Wile E. Coyote fires Acme and files suit
Not reviewed posted: Apr 11, 2024 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Philosophy • Emotional Type: Article Request Details: I mainly write poetry but I would like to see what the people think of my Articles. So here is one about the connection of love in a general sense.
Not reviewed posted: Apr 5, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Family • Relationship Type: Serial Request Details: This is the first part of a series. Please tell me what I need to improve in terms of plot, character development and description. Please tell me what I need to add or cut out. Also, please tell me what you liked and didn't like. Thank you!
Not reviewed posted: Apr 3, 2024 Genre(s): Emotional • Romance/Love • Other Type: Poetry Request Details: Hi there! Just looking for feedback. Happy to exchange a review of your item of comparable length. Thank you!!!
Not reviewed posted: Mar 31, 2024 Genre(s): Community • Cultural • History Type: Poetry Request Details: Please review
Not reviewed posted: Mar 26, 2024 Genre(s): History • Military • War Type: Poetry Request Details: This is my first real attempt at poetry. It is based upon the Band of Brothers mini-series. Honest critique appreciated.
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