Chapter #5Tickle her nose. by: Peter   You decide that the best way to get Bianca's attention would be to tickle her nose. As you stare ahead at the two cavernous nostrils before you, you try to figure out how exactly you will go about doing this.
A strand of hairs from Bianca's head lays on her cheek, gently blowing with the breeze created by her breathing. Deciding to use your surroundings to your advantage, you cautiously walk over to the hairs, being careful not to lose balance and slide off the enormous girl's face. Scooping up the hair with both hands and twisting it into a thin, pointy strand, you once again approach Bianca's nostrils.
You stop again, fascinated with and a little afraid of the powerful winds coming from Bianca's nose. Then, remembering why you're holding the girl's hair: "Well, here goes nothing!"
You stick the hairs way up Bianca's right nostril, poking the inside of her nose. The nostril twitches a little. Increasing your efforts, you continuously withdraw and re-insert the hairs, swishing them up and down as you do so, in order to better tickle the inside of the nose. Before long, both nostrils began to flare up, and Bianca's eyes, already closed, shut tighter.
"Now we're getting somewhere ... Wake up already!"
You continue to tickle Bianca's nose. You couldn't be sure exactly when, but one of the pokes from your hairs must have gone too far. As the hairs accidentally tickled an extra-sensitive part of Bianca's inner nose, her body inevitably reacted. The giant girl's lips parted suddenly, causing you to lose your balance and fall forward.
"Ahhh ..."
That isn't good. You know from that sound that Bianca is preparing to sneeze, and the fact that you just fell forward and shoved the hairs deeper inside her right nostril as she inhaled isn't helping the matter. Scrambling to your feet, you quickly pull the hair strand from the depths of Bianca's right nostril, but the damage, unfortunately, is done.
"Ahhh ... AHHH ..."
As the enormous girl desparately inhales, you turn away from the menacingly flaring nostrils in front of you and run towards her chin. You might have been able to escape in time, but at that moment Bianca's head tilted back with the force of her inhalation.
"Aaahhh ..."
You fall backwards, heading towards the girl's gigantic nose, which you knew was about to explode any second. As the force of Bianca's inhalation and the force of gravity simultaneously act upon you, you are sucked into her right nostril, where you crash against the wall. This certainly did nothing to abade the tickle in the girl's nose, but at this point she was going to sneeze either way. Clutching the quivering wall of the nostril behind you with both hands, you hold on for dear life.
"Ahhh ... Aaahh ... AAACHOO!"
Bianca sneezes, and the force of it launches you straight out of her nose. You fly through the air briefly, and then land on the girl's stomach.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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