This choice: This is where it Truly Begins • Go Back...Chapter #6Our Hero by: Unknown The character Carol will resemble Julia Roberts and have Brown Hair. I'm changing Aidans love interest's name to Katori, she's a warrior with black and Purple Hair
"Ah Living Philadelphia, the greatest city to ever exist, well from my perspective at least, known for its extensive contributions to the U.S, this place is widely consistent in terms of culture, sports, music, and business, but for science, it's a different story because... That's about to change. We then shift to a luxury home where Aidan lives along with his predecessors. The sun rises from the glazing morning, we shift to Aidan's academic achievements and a picture of him opening his company. Then the door begins to knock, waking up Aidan (Master Sanchez, Its time) says Astro (who resembles Herbie from The Fantastic Four), Aidan wakes up from his sleep and gets change for his first day at work. "Alright lets do it," Aidan unlocks the door and heads downstairs, we shift to his house being valued a lot, Luxury Backyard, Luxury pool, he's living out the best of his lifetime. We shift to Astro cooking him an omlete and hashbrowns for breakfast, "A very exciting day for you sir," Astro said.
"Uh yeah ofcourse," then they heard a voice from the right side saying. "A delicious appetitete is always needed my boy," Drako said. "Hey Drako, my dragon buddy," Aidan said.
"you named it," Drako said. Drako is a purple dragon who is 6ft long standing 13ft tall (with wings). Then the trio begin to hear another voice, "Don't mind me fellas," Says Little Joe (Changing Aidan's Brother's name to Little Joe (Age 27)) Joe arrives at the table and sits with difficulty, (He's the size of a 2 year old baby) "hey there little man," Aidan makes fun of him saying that. The three were laughing at Joe for his size, we cut to a flash back scene where Aidan invented a shrink ray and puts it on terminate size, he was presenting himself along with his family when the button triggers and accidently hit Joe, resulting in his size.
We cut to the present day with Aidan looking at his apple watch and said "Oh Time is at its accelerating speed, better catch the speed force," he says as he rushes outside and leaves for work. "well looks like I have to go as well," Drako says. "Where you going," Joseph says. "Off to see the wild," Drako replied as he flies off. Astro approaches to Joe and said, "I bet we should get going," "Right," Joe replied. We cut to Aidan listening to country music on the road while heading to work. Aidan's phone begins ringing, it was his girlfriend Kate. Her text messages has said "Hey babe," she waited and she text again saying "Uh hello," then her text received a final blow saying "Maybe you aren't really the man," Aidan arrives at the building with his name S on top, people gather to take pictures of this young billionaire, many of them were asking questions "Mr Sanchez," is all he heard. Then a police chase occurs right around his area, "A crime, its go time," Aidan rushes at the bushes where he transforms into the Cosmic Man (Resembling DarkHawk from Marvel) and flies over there to save the day. "Wait where's Mr Sanchez. Enimies wearing armor suits blast at the cops's car.
They were stealing some posionus serum from the science truck, "Our job is done, lets go," Says Cannon Man. "Ah Cannon Man, long time no see," Says Aidan. THey lookup to see Cosmic Man and scream his name. "Lets see if this blast does any harm." Cannon man blast Aidan but misses, Aidan begins his fight with Cannon Man and his assistant. We shift to Kate driving her car trying to reach Aidan, (who doesn't know he's Cosmic Man) "Oh come on Aidan, please pick up," then she crashes into a car causes her to drop her phone, the driver comes out and flips her off. "Says you," she says in anger and frustration. We then have a flashback of how Kate and Aidan meet, Aidan pleases her during lunch at college, but as the 2 begin to hang out, Aidan begins to draw more into his academics then focusing a relationship with her, Kate hopes he would see this and make it up, but he never did. We shift back to Kate making up her mind and says "Aidan,"
Aidan delivers one flick considering his strength is around superman. Aidan makes fun of them as they get arrested and said. "Oh gotta go, it was nice rounding you up, but I have business,) "I get my revenge cosmic man," Aidan flies into his office secretly and puts on his business suit. He leaves the room and heads to a meeting he's appointed, after the meeting, Aidan begins working on his experiment of drones. then he hears a voice "Aidan Sanchez," He turns to see his girlfriend looking angry and said "Babe what happen," "don't say anything," she says. "Aidan, when I first lay my eyes on you, I thought you were the one, but this?" she ask him "Kate, I can explain, I just got a little excited that's all, its not anything bad," He said. "A little excited, you barely spend any time with me back in college," "I know, but this time I gonna make it 100% guaranteed, I promise," He said. "Ah promise? you said that everytime we have a conversation like this," She says. "Kate what are you saying," Aidan replies. "I cannot be a second priority in your life, I cannot just sit and wait for you to do something for me, I'm sorry Aidan, the bonding is just not in us anymore," Kate replied. Shock and heartbroken, Aidan cannot exchange words due to her statement.
Kate gives him a hug saying "Goodbye Aidan, I hope you find someone who make you happier then me," and with that she leaves the building, Aidan is looking at her fading away thinking about what he coul'dve done "Chances of winning her back are 0.00000% percent," he said. After work Aidan flies up to the sky using the cosmic glider suit and looks around the city. "Oh man," then he hears a voice saying (howday Glider,") says Drako. "Drako, what a surprised," he said "I've had a pleasant day buddy, I met a was taking pictures of a wolf eating a deer, although I was caught by hunters in the view, they were afraid so I flew off, could've said hi but nevertheless it was intriguing, what about you," there was a moment of silence, Aidan exchange saying "She broke up with me," "Kate," Drako questioned. Aidan nodded. "I see,... but hey you still have us, I'm pretty sure another girl can make you happier, you just needed to commit to a relationship,' Drako advice Aidan. "hearing it from a talking dragon, thanks," they fly off home where Astro is preparing dinner.
The door opens with Tiny Joe Returning home from work. "Off what a day," he turns to see Aidan's car being teleported back at the parking lot in his house. "Uh he's flying, that makes sense," Aidan and Drako Arrives at the front door greeting Joe, Astro made Chicken Alfredo pasta and said (dig in,) Astro and Joe were confused to see Aidan being silent, "you alright little bro," Joe said. "Yeah I'm perfectly fine," Aidan says. "She broke up with you," Astro said. "Dude," Drako says. "I'll be right back," aidan says when he goes to the backyard, his lights were on, pool lights and water fall were on, it was a night for them but not Aidan this time. Aidan looks at his phone holding pictures between him and Kate. Aidan goes to the call app and search for his mom's name, Aidan presses call and his mom said "Hello Aidam," Aidan responds and they begin their talk. We end this chapter with
leaving the United States and shifting to the same island where our 3 characters will be introduced. A normal deer was eating grass until it spotted a mutant creature hiding, she ran as well as the creature. The creature catches the deer and is about to finish it when the ground begins to shake, and they see a massive foot coming by and stop in front of it, It is the giant woman's daughter Katori herself, She spots and picks up a mutant creature bigger than the deer, she then eats the creature herself, rubbing her stomach and moves on.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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