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A gentle giant anthro story, for those who like them absurdly huge.
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Chapter #4

Noticed

    by: Flangies Author IconMail Icon
Continuing to look upward, you see, way high up beyone the sky, a face start to come into view. Also patterned in black and white, you at first think it is a tattooed human face, but by the somewhat jutting nose and enormous hole on top, you realize that it is a human-like orca girl. She looks absolutely stunning as she her face becomes clearer, and you can't help but thank her for stopping the meteorite. You still can't believe that nobody else seems to notice anything going on at all.

Suddenly, the huge orcaess starts to speak in her angelic voice. "Wait, come here, Amosa, I can feel something!" Suddenly, another gigantic orcaess, even bigger than the first by almost half a body length, swims through the sky to the first one. "What is it, Fortuna, do you feel an earthquake?" asks the larger orcaess in an equally angelic voice.

"No, big sister, I think someone is praising me!" You suddenly realize that you must be the one that this huge divine cetacean is detecting, and suddenly grow fearful that perhaps everyone was not noticing the goddesses on purpose.

"Really, one of the humans can see you? Let me try, little sister. Amosa, the larger sister, gently pushes Fortuna to the side and swim closer, until her looming head covers the whole sky. "Little human, wherever you are, if you can hear me, wave your arms and jump up and down!" You don't know if you should, but you perform the task anyway. Other people seem to be looking at you strangely, but the face beyond the clouds locks onto you with utter amazement.

"Wow, you're right, someone CAN see us! I must share this news with Prima, she'll know what to do." Suddenly emitting a high-pitched squeal, Amosa makes room for the third orcaess you have seen today. This one was even larger than the other two, by several times even, and her black and white patterned body looked to have a sort of golden aura around it. "Is there something that you need of me, my younger kin?" asks the eldest and probably most powerful goddess Prima.

"We discovered that one of the humans on Earth can see and hear us!" Now, even the great Prima looks surprised. Quickly turning her attention to the planet, you suddenly feel self aware as the huge orcaess seems to probe your mind. "You are right, a human does indeed acknowledge us, and he even felt it when I looked into his soul. This is something I have never witnessed before, my younger sisters, and unlike you, I have seen all of Earth's history."

"What should we do, Prima?" asked Fortuna, who never took her enormous eyes off you. "We can't just ignore something this big!"

Prima sighed as she thought, and you could feel the warm breeze enter Earth's atmosphere and almost lift you of the ground, although it did not seem to affect anyone else. After a minute, the great orcaess goddess revealed her decision.
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