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A child becomes an outcast, because the child is half human
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Chapter #4

A small rocky island, with many snakes and eels.

    by: Unknown
         You hear your fathers voice, opening your eyes and looking at him. You see the sword gleaming him leaning against it tower above you. *Crack* You screamed, as your father reached out to save you, but her couldn't save you from the endless loneliness of the vast dark ocean. You dropped into the water.

         "*Gasp*That nightmare again, the one I'm living. Why didn't you reach a little quicker, or farther. *Sniff* Why." You rubbed the tears into your face and made your way to the little spring in your cave. In the still water you could see your reflection. How your pupils are now slits, or how your skin has grayish tan. How your hair was now short and roughed up. How your once bright eyes were dull and emotionless. Even, how your canine teeth grew sharp and long. You had changed so much since arriving on this desolate rocky island, all the hope you've lost over your eighteen years here. Even your once strong fishlike tail, had grown dull and skinny like all the snakes that lived on this island. You wanted to leave, but you couldn't it was your home, your cold, rocky, lonely home. The only thing warm was the sun, but it is so far away.

         The one thing that had not changed since coming here was you fathers sword. It still glistened in the light, with It's gold handle and silver blade. Somehow it stayed the same, you grew and began to become like a snake, but it still the sword was the same. You now found fish larger then you and swallow them alive to satisfy your hunger, unlike before where you hunted small fish and sliced them into pieces avoid large dangerous things. The sea, this vast sea you lived in changed you. It made you cold and rough, you became like the sea vast and empty filled with life and yet so full of emptiness. Like your heart and your groaning stomach.

         You slithered out of your cave, crossing the dark rocks and diving into dark waters. Maybe you'll get lucky and find something really big like a shark, or maybe you'll have to settle for a small group of fish or eels or snakes. You dived and looked at the vast blue emptiness. You looked down at your palms and they got darker like something was above your head, looking up you see a twenty to thirty foot long brown object floating on the surface. You swim up to investigate go to the surface to see people walking around on the brown thing, but they looked nothing like your father. They all had bulging bouncing chest and very slim waist with curvy hips all put on a slim, curvy, fragile looking frame.

         You snuck around and listened to their conversations, all of which were high pitched. "Sally, if we don't find land and fresh water soon we'll die of dehydration." The other responded. "Well Karin, we ended up in uncharted waters, how can I navigate properly." A third voice replies. "Stop arguing, it won't help and it isn't like anyone knows these waters." You chime in without realizing. "Well I do. There is only on island for miles." They all get quite and about 17 people look over the edge seeing you. You wave and awkwardly say. "Hi." They all just stair and whisper among themselves. One finally speaks up. "Can you lead us to the island? We can't tell our way around here."

         One of them whispers loudly. "We shouldn't trust merfolk, they kill people." You are rubbed the wrong way by that comment and scream. "How the fuck would you know! The only other person I've met was my father, thanks to him I'm alone out here! Find your own fucking way around and don't step foot on my island or I'll will end up killing someone!" You begin to swim away, furious. You're apatite is ruined, so you begin to head home. "Wait! I didn't mean to offend you, but your kind have a bad reputation." You become even madder, turning around and lock your eyes on to her. They all back away from the edge, but you climb into the boat and tackle her yelling in her face. "I don't have a kind! My father was a human! You inconsiderate bitch! You must fucking love to piss others off, because I'm about a second away from eating your ass and listening to you die in pain as you digest like the many irritating sharks I've eaten!" You are crying, but your rage is definite. The person under you is scared, but can see your pain.

         "I'm so sorry, I really didn't mean to upset you. If it really comes to it eat me and let my friends go." The look in her eyes is serious. You can't handle any more bottling your emotions, and you break down hugging her and crying into her chest. She Hugs you and strokes the back of your head. Soon her clothes are soaked with your tears and your done crying. You get up and lift her to her feet, looking around everyone has a bright red face and is covering up their eyes. You ask. "Why is everyone red? Are you sick or something?"

         The girl you picked up was even redder. You ask again. "Is something wrong? Hello? Did I do something?" Someone finally speaks up. "You put your face into her boobs. Your not supposed to touch there on women." You tilt your head, asking. "What's a women?" Most blink in disbelief, others start to laugh. You feel your face heat up, and you say. "This is the first time I've interacted with people give me a break! And why is my face heating up?" One just says. "For a guy, you are more innocent then a boat full of young female virgins. We are going to have to fill you in on a ton of stuff." You just nod, not havering a clue what she just said.

         You push their boat to your island, which honestly is just a rocky lump with a cave in the middle. You help them to the island by carrying them through the water on your back and tail. The change of scenery in your cave was good, they filled you in on everything about girls and guys, and sex, and some emotions. You enjoyed the company, it felt like something that was missing was found. You learned all 19 of their names, finally they asked yours. You really didn't know how to reply. "Um, well I never was named and I never knew my fathers. I only know his face and I have his sword."

         You pull out the sword and hold it in your hands. Samantha gasped. "That's Bowhan, the monster slayers, famous lost claymore. He said he lost it in a battle almost nineteen years ago." You are unfazed by the her words, because you don't understand most of them. "Well I'm almost nineteen and he lost me and it when part of the cliff fell into the ocean." The girls all stared at you shocked that you didn't care. You ask. "What is a monster slayer? Is it a good thing?" The girls all gulp and one responds. "A monster slayer is someone who kills monsters, like well anything that is considered different. Like you." Your heart shatters and you just look at your palms, staring in disbelief.

         One of the girls speaks up. "He is human, he feels, he makes mistakes, he is one of us." With those words you felt your body tingle, and all the girl stared. You looked at your hands they looked identical accept for a much brighter tan, then you saw below your hands feet and something big dangling. You ask. "How did I get feet? And what the hell is this?" You smack the thing dangling from in between your legs, surprisingly it felt good. You look around to see all the girls staring at whatever that thing is. One says. "Who would have thought that he would look this good as a human? Because I sure didn't imagine that being as big as my arm." They all looked at you a little bit like a predator starring at a fine meal, but their faces were all redder then blood.

         you cover it the best you can and hide behind a rock. Jennifer, the girl that pissed you off at first, said. "Remember that talk about sex? Well that is the thing you stick in a girl to get her pregnant, well lets just say yours is above average in more ways then one. Let's just say all of the girls now like you a little more." She smiles at you, but her slowly walking towards you with that look is freaking you out. You back into a wall and nervously yell. "Stay back, or I'll eat you I swear!" She looks at you and laughs. "Sure mister, I'm a human now." She puts her hands on you and you shove your face into hers and attempt to swallow her, it fails.

         She reaches for your newly appeared appendage, and her hand slides in it. You moan because of how good it feels, and it stiffens up to her elbow. She says. "Wow it really is a monster, I like it!" With the word monster you feel your body tingle and you see your tail grow back and your new appendage, turns out to be apart of you merman body. She looks at you and says. "What the hell? It's the same thing. Geronimo!" She spasm as she jumps most of the way into your whatever, after about five minutes you finally see what it looks like it looks about the same except now on of the lumps under it was shaped like Jennifer and its coming out of a slit in your scales. Jennifer said. "Defiantly a different experience, but it's comfy in here and I'm alive so. Cool. Though I'm probably gonna get mega pregnant."

         you and the others flip. "How can you be so calm! You could have died or might die!" The others are slowly approaching you and poking your sack. The others say stuff like. "Impossible." Or "Your a real idiot Jennifer." Or "Yep, it's really that big." In response to the pokes Jennifer says. "Quit poking it, he isn't a monster or strange creature. He is still a human like us." They all nod. And you feel the tingle come back. Before you know it you are human again, and the girls are hungry but for what?
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