You stand before her door to her bedroom before you hear her say calmly.
“Just go back to your place…”
Before you can even reply you suddenly find your surroundings have completely changed in a blink of an eye! No longer are you standing in Jane’s house, rather, you’re back in your own apartment! She teleported you!
“Whoa! What the heck? She… Ohmygosh!” you gasp as you turn around and take a good look at where you are. You see your familiar living room, your furniture, and your clothes all over the place, your books, your TV…
You walk into your bedroom, which is cluttered with dirty laundry all over your bed and your closet wide open. It reminds you how you have neglected your place over the past month because you had spent all your time working.
“Okay, I guess I had better start cleaning this place up…” you groan.
Then, a familiar voice rings in your ears, out of nowhere.
“Your place is a mess, John!”
You freeze! That sounded like Jane!
“Huh? Jane? Where are you?” you shout.
You look around but you don’t see anyone. Your door is locked and all the windows are closed. Then, it hits you: She’s a Goddess now. She doesn’t need a door to get in anymore.
“I’m watching through your eyes, John.”
You look back at your messy bed and all the clothes on the floor.
“Let’s clean, fold and put away those clothes, shall we?”
As you look around your bedroom, all the clothes disappear from your bed, the chair and the floor. Then, they reappear again, completely clean, neatly folded, and put away in your dresser and in your closet!
“There, much better, John!”
“Whooaa!” you gasp.
Then, you teleport to your living room, where you see clothes and books stacked all over the floor, the couch, and the dining table.
“I’ll clean them up for you…”
“Jane? Wait… What?” you respond. “You don’t have to…”
Suddenly, all the books fly off the table and floor and they magically levitate into their places on the bookshelf. The clothes disappear and re-appear again neatly cleaned and folded in the dresser and all the papers are sorted and filed into the filing cabinet drawer, which slides open so that the papers magically fly into the correct folders before the drawer closes on its own.
“Holy shit!” you exclaim out loud.
Lastly, you teleport into the kitchen, where dirty dishes are scattered all over the counter around the sink. The dishwasher door drops open, exposing a load of dirty dishes as well.
“Well, let’s clean this up…” Jane’s voice rings between your ears.
The water faucet runs and fills the sink with water as soap fills up the sink with bubbles. Then, the dishes drop in and are magically washed before they fly out and are dried by the cloth before they are all neatly stacked in the empty cupboards above the kitchen counter.
“This is unreal!” you sigh. “Fantastic!”
“Now, the bathroom!” Jane giggles.
You’re teleported to your bathroom, which is dirty as always. A sponge comes to life as water sprays all over the tub and the shower, including the sink and the toilet bowl. The entire bathroom is cleaned in minutes without you having to lift a finger by some invisible magical force.
Finally, you teleport back to your bedroom and find yourself standing before your bed.
Then, Jane teleports in front of you.
“Now, do you finally believe me when I tell you that you’re a Goddess?” you ask her.
“Yes! I wanted to know what had happened and… I knew everything!” she giggled as her voice seemed to come from everywhere. “So, I guess it’s time for me to show my appreciation…”
She waved her hands and suddenly all my clothes disappeared! I was standing in my bedroom, completely naked!
“Hey!”
She laughed, knowing there was nothing I could have done to stop her. She was in complete control. She was in control of me and everything around me. In fact, she was in complete control of everything!
What was she going to do next?
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