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Kyon, from the Haruhi Suzumiya series shrinks! He’s been through worse, right?
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Chapter #4

Sweet Hiding Place

    by: Shrunk Maker Author IconMail Icon
As soon as Asahina-san saw Haruhi walk in, she tossed me into her mouth, knowing that if Haruhi saw something abnormal like me, it could result in jeopardy of the whole world.

To me, I landed into the wet cavern at an extreme speed and the light vanished as Asahina-san closed her mouth. I could smell Asahina-san ‘s warm breath that smelt like sweet ice tea and the tongue I was lying on lifted and deposited me under the tongue.

“How was your day, Suzumiya-san?” I heard Asahina-san boom.

“Way too hot, Mikuru-chan!” Haruhi replied, sounding very irritated. “Could I ask you to make me some of that ice tea?” she asked nicely, surprisingly.

“Mm-hmm” Asahina-san meekly replied, turning around from Haruhi and opened her mouth and let some fresh air in for me to breathe in. She quickly proceeded to make an ice tea for Haruhi, who was practically dying from sweating.

I found it very difficult to breathe as I was wrapped in this thick liquid, which was Asahina-san’s saliva. Everytime I opened my mouth, I felt like I was being drowned in very thick and warm tea as it sure tasted and felt like one. However, being safely kept under Asahina-san’s tongue, I didn’t have to worry about being swallowed accidentally.

Soon, Asahina-san finished making ice tea for Haruhi and announced, “Here you go, Suzumiya-san. Now, excuse me, I have to toilet quickly, okay?”

“Sure, whatever.” Haruhi replied, not caring as she took the ice cold cup and sipped from it.

As soon as Asahina-san left the club room, she spat me out onto her palm and I felt the cool air, through the thick liquid coating that I was wrapped in.

“I’m so sorry, Kyon-kun!!!” Asahina-san apologized, “I couldn’t let Suzumiya-san see you, and I didn’t have any pocket on my maid costume.”

“Cough, cough. It’s okay, I understand” I said, taking in some more of Asahina-san’s sweet saliva involuntarily. “Could I possibly be washed at a tap?” I asked, looking up at the cutie who looked really sorry for her actions. “

I’m so very sorry again, Kyon-kun” She insisted. “I’m sure my higher ups will know how to help you.” She said, trying to make me feel better. She walked outside to the field outside and placed me under a tap of cold water. It was refreshing and allowed me to clean myself of the sticky saliva.

After few minutes, I was back to my old self. Naked and cold. “What now?” I shouted up.

Asahina-san realized that I was saying something and scooped me up gently with her soft hands and brought me closer to her ears again, allowing me to repeat the question.

“We will need to head to my house, where we can get in touch with... Umm... Classified.” She whispered gently, blowing her hot breath over me, reminding me how sweet it was in her mouth.

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