This choice: Stand still so you can feed from her! • Go Back...Chapter #4Stand still so you can feed from her! by: Marked1   She may be a real looker, but you couldn't ignore just how starved you felt. "Sit down, won't you?" You ordered her, pointing towards the couch.
"Okay." Was her vapid reply. She did exactly as you told her, moving past you and sitting on the leather couch in the living room. You noticed that she had broken eye contact while she walked but still obeyed you. You waited and watched her, making sure that she couldn't make eye contact from her position. After a few minutes Rose began to snap out of it, shaking her head and mumbling something. "Ugh... What the fuck? What happened?" She stood up woozily, rubbing her head as she struggled to move. "Ugh, why am I down here? I should be in bed!" She turned around, coming face to face with you. "Ah! What the hell are you... why... are... uh..." Her eyes went out again, going dull like the eyes of a doll.
"Huh, apparently it wears off if I break contact for too long... maybe if I kept eye contact for a longer amount of time it would last longer... Whatever, I can test that out on someone else, right now I need to eat!" You turned your attention to Rose, still standing at attention before you. You command her to tilt her head and she does so, lolling her head to right while still blankly staring at you. You giggle and dive in, sinking your teeth deeply into her exposed neck.
It was like ambrosia, the warm liquid sliding down your throat and filling you with a sense of euphoria beyond anything you had ever felt before! You kept on drinking, slurping down every drop of her life force that you could. Before you could even think of stopping the last bit of her blood slipped past you lips, rolled gracefully along your tongue, then went down beyond where you could taste. Never before had you felt more alive, every sense standing on its edge and every muscle tensed in excitement as your feast ended. You looked down at Rose, gasping for air as the fantastic taste of blood lingered in your mouth.
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