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You and your girlfriend decide to have some fun in virtual reality, but SHE is in control!
This choice: Gasping, you feel a rib ripped free, without disturbing your flesh...  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Gasping, you feel a rib ripped free...

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Eve gripped her side, as she felt a rib vanish. An ache that spread through her whole body, sent her collapsing to the ground, half-kneeling.

Looking up at the sky she cursed Julie, "Do these... damned things really need to be so big?" She grumbled, her hands flanking her immense bust, too petite to cover even those too large nipples. Eve shuddered at the touch, the merest brush sending thrills up and down her spine.

Julie's voice spoke clearly, from on high. "This is your Eden, this is your Eve. A woman created in your own image of perfection."

There was a rumble of thunder, Eve recognised it as a booming giggle.

"It's not just physical, you embody the type of woman you want too."

Eve's mouth opened and closed, unable to question, still taking on board Julie's words.

"You're hyper sensitive... and a bit dim too." The thunder rolled again, "All your fantasy." She said with a finality.

A twig snapped, and your gaze shot in the direction of the noise. Crouching lower, watched like the terrified prey she felt she was. You're frozen in place, as a man emerges from behind a tree.

An Adonis of a man, with a firm jaw line, impressive pecs and a six-pack set of abs. Swallowing a groan, you take a few moments to recognise the remains of your former face. Your Adam is your idealised former body. Another roll of thunder, announces Julie's amusement.
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