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A bet with a hypnotist that goes a little wrong
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Chapter #5

At The Bar

    by: scarlett_raven Author IconMail Icon
A lot of what happened I was told afterwards by others such what happened at the bar after I left that afternoon.

“Come Susie you have to be joking” John said to his sister. “You mean Pete went all the way home from the theater with a face full of make up and didn't notice it.” “Not quite” answered Susan “He just didn't think that there was anything wrong with him having the make up on that's all.” she corrected her brother. “That makes all the difference.” John said sarcastically.

It was at this moment that Steven came in to the bar. “I am feeling a bit rough after last night I need a drink.” he said making his way to the bar. Once there he saw John and Susan standing there. “Hi guys” he said making his way over to them. “Steven will tell brother what happened with Pete last night” asked Susan. Steven told John the events of the night before but went one step further than Susan had and told John that Pete could be put back under again .

“You mean that if you told him to do so he would make up his face again” John asked. “That and anything else I asked him to do within reason.” Steven replied. “Thanks for that Steven” Susan said disapprovingly “I hadn't told him that bit.” “I live to serve” Steven said to her with a smile on his face. “Don't worry Sis I wouldn't do anything nasty to Pete I know how fond of him you are” John said turning to his sister. “I only want to get him back for jokes he has played on me in the past” he went on to say. “I take it by that statement you have an idea forming in that head of yours” asked Steven.

“Oh I have a idea and what an idea it is” came John reply.

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