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Meet the Smiths, a suburban family whose lives are about to change when a parcel arrives..
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Chapter #4

Revenge is sweet

    by: Fitness1984 Author IconMail Icon
Everyone in the family looked at the muscular teen sitting on his knees on the ground. His massive torso was draped with some last shreds of t-shirt. The big smile on his face revealed his blinking white teeth, as he showed his twin brother with his upper body could do now. His larger than baseball-sized upper arms, his square chest muscles, his rippling eight-pack; he had become an impressive specimen. If you would have been told he was a Mister Olympia, you would have believed it.

Dylan, his twin brother, looked on in amazement. He was a little bit scared at first, but he knew his brother wouldn’t hurt him. As Davy proposed to Dylan to touch his biceps, the twin happily obliged. Feeling the huge, rock-hard muscle in his upper arms made Dylan send a shiver down his spine.

“Wow bro! It’s rock hard!”

Davy’s smile grew only bigger. He extended his arm towards his twin brother and asked him to help get up. Dylan, not sure if he would be able to give any help, grabbed the enormous hand of his brother by the wrist. He added his other hand as well. Then he started to pull. He couldn’t really get any motion in his brother’s body, but luckily Davy helped himself.

It was the first time for Davy to use his newly grown legs; his upper body weighed a ton and he wasn’t sure how his legs would react. As he placed his feet on the ground and he pulled himself up on his brother, he felt blood rushing to his thighs. They sprang into action as they had to push up the entire upper body.

As Davy, leaning on Dylan, almost crushing him, extended higher and higher in height, he surpassed every single person in the garden. Finally, as he reached his full height, he was almost 10 inches taller than the biggest person: his dad. He looked like one of the superheroes from his comics; tall, ripped and powerful. Everyone in the garden let out “oohs” and “aahs”.

Then, all of a sudden, his expression changed. He felt strong, confident and invulnerable. He was no longer the smallest person of the family; he didn’t have to listen to anyone of them anymore; he was finally grown up and strong enough to be the one with the power. This made him realize that he didn’t have to hide behind his twin brother anymore when they got in a fight, like just before. He was now able to pick his own fights! And he already had the first victim in mind: Justin!

Justin, impressed with what happened to his little brother, was happy the entire fight from before did not go through. He looked on in awe as his little brother outgrew him in both height and strength. He was positioned behind the massive Davy as he inspected his own body. Justin had the perfect view of his rippling back. Little did he know that Davy’s expression suddenly changed from the broad smile into something darker; he was out for revenge.

Justin saw the muscles in Davy’s back ripple and flex as he slowly twisted his torso. The behemoth was looking across the garden, almost as if he was finding someone. When his stare crossed Justin’s, Justin knew from the mean look on Davy’s face that he was in trouble.

“You!” Davy’s dark voice boomed as he grabbed his big brother by his collar and hoisted him into the air, only with one hand. Justin gulped. “You did this to me?! You made me this FREAK!”

Jerome and Frank both sprang into action as they wanted to save Justin; they knew Davy could kill him in an instant if he wanted to. However when both men came close, Davy’s free hand swung round, sending the guys through the air to land several feet away. It would be difficult to stop him.

Justin, still hanging in the air face-to-face with his big little brother, didn’t know how to respond. “Why did you shoot me? You didn’t know what the gun could do! It could have killed me!” Davy yelled in his face, getting angrier by the minute. He let Justin back on the ground, only to twist his entire body around to grab him in a headlock. “You know, it only takes a slight flex to crack your neck…”

“You wouldn’t do that…!” Justin cried as he felt the rock hard warm muscle of his brother’s arm around his neck. “I’m your brother…”

“You tried to kill me as well!”, Davy replied, “So why do you think I wouldn’t do the same to you…?”

“I didn’t! It was an accident…I swear!” Justin cried harder as he was frightened to death. He really didn’t know if his brother was serious or playing a game with him.

In the mean time, the rest of the family knew they couldn’t do much, but they had to stop Davy. He was too big and too strong, Justin didn’t stand a chance. That’s when Amber came up with an idea; why don’t we give him an equal opponent?

Amber looked for the box the gun came in and found it on the floor under the table. Luckily, the gun was still inside. She grabbed it, aimed it at Justin and shot!
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