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The story of a superheroine who saves her city with super sneezes.
This choice: Jane abandons the tissues and catches the first sneeze in something else  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Jane abandons the tissues and catches the first...

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"ah... aH... AH..."
No time to get the tissues. Barely time to snatch up her covers and pull them to her face. She would regret it later, but this sneeze was coming on too fast and too strong for any other course of action.
"AHHHHH.... CHUMPH!" Jane muffled the sneeze against the blankets, feeling herself leave a damp trail behind her as she lifted her head, only to have it snap back down again with the force of two fresh sneezes, both just as irrepressible as the first.
"ACHOO! AH- AHCHUMPH!"
She wrenched her eyes open and scrubbed her nose with what blanket remained that didn't have enough snot on it to make matter worse, but the itch refused to be pacified. Unable to resist it any longer, she gasped in one last, hitching breath, and:
"AAAAHCHOOOO! Ah.. ACHOO! Ah... AH... aTISHooo!" Her blankets now soaking wet, Jane made a valiant effort to slow the next sneeze down, but succeeded only in driving her nose to greater heights.
"AhhhhhhHHHHHHCHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" The whole bed jumped with the force of her sneeze, and she gasped for breath, feeling as though that last sneeze had sucked out all the air she had.
Her nose wasn't going to let up, though. The initial, burning itch had become a powerful tingling, as though her nose was still vibrating from the power of her earlier sneezes, but if anything, this sensation made her more desperate to gain relief. However, almost as though her body had decided to torture her, the next sneeze was stuck.
"Ahhh....Ahhh... ehhh..."
Jane was paralysed with the need to let it go, but her nose wouldn't let her, the tingling building almost to the critical point and then receding, again and again, until Jane couldn't bear it any longer. She scrubbed and rubbed and massaged her nose in her desperation, until finally...
"Ahh..ehhh...AH!..."
But as the sneeze built, Jane realised that this sneeze would not be like the others. A supersneeze was coming!

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1. Jane manages to contain the effects of the supersneeze to her room

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2. Jane loses control of the supersneeze

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