This choice: stop's the vacuum and become's curious to what you even are • Go Back...Chapter #5Discovered and Pocketed! by: guy14   ...stop's her vacuum after being to frustrated that it wasn't able to do the job. And so the cute maid decided that if you want a job done right, you have to do it yourself. So, you watch as the now off vacuum leave's your sight and see the giant cute face of the maid who was just starring you down at this point. Looking at you she was curious to what you are. When seeing you move at first she assumed you were a bug, but while starring you down, she realized that you don't look like any bug that she has seen before.
You just grip the mattress string all while this is going and then try to climb your way up it. When the maid notice's this she act's fast and a giant hand appear's behind you. Noticing the shadow of her hand, you grip the string tightly. But it's no use as her strength is much greater then your's. You plucked off the mattress string and in a tight soft grip of the maid's hand's. All your able to do is struggle which was pointless and watch as your taken out from under the bed and brought up to be face to face with the cute giantess face of the maid.
In the maid's hand you felt so strange to her. Looking at you, she noticed that you look like a tiny man doll, but with flipping your tiny naked body around in her hand using only her finger. You were powerless to stop her from observing you. And she see's you do a bit of fighting back and she also notice's your attempt's to communicate with her. Right away she concludes that your a real tiny man. She is shocked and curious about you, but instead of saying anything to you. She gave you a smile, *giggle*, and a pat on the head before putting you into her back pocket with only your head sticking out. So, she can finish up her work.
She then grabbed all of her supplies and left your hotel room. While she she walked you were unable to move with the swaying motion of her butt. The maid got onto the elevator and headed for the next floor (5th floor) that had the room that she was suppose to clean. While she stood still you were able to get some movement. And you started wiggling your way out of her back pocket. But when you got close to getting out, you looked up to see a giant thumb that belong to the maid that forcefully pushed you back in the pocket. She didn't even brother saying anything to you, as the elevator dinged and your back in motion. And throughout the cleaning, each time her walking would stop and you were able to start wiggling. You were greeted with the same response each time, her giant thumb ruining all your progress. It got to a point where you just stop trying. And you sat in the pocket and wonder how worried your wife must be right now.
Meanwhile going to your wife's position at the moment:
Your wife Lucy actually hasn't discovered that your even gone yet. You see when she left you and headed into the lobby, she got distracted by cloth's in the gift shop and after about 20 minutes of trying cloths on. She knew she ha to make her way to the car for your sake. And while walking in the direction of the hallway to the elevator to the parking garage. Lucy over a buff man in the gym talking about free gym membership for the week, but you must sign up today. So of course Lucy had to once again ignore the big priority and sign her and her husband up for the gym which toke about 30 mins. Afterwards she made it to the parking garage but ended up getting a bit lost which also made her a bit more late. Eventually after about 2 or 3 hour's she finally make's it back to the elevator and just hope's that your not to upset with her. As she enters the elevator and see's that it's going to make a stop at 5 before hitting her floor at 7...
Back to the you:
The maid was finally done with cleaning all the rooms, announced to the world that her shift was done and then returned the cleaning cart on the 5th floor. She then made her way to the elevator and once it dinged arrived. She entered and leaned against the wall. And to your amazement you look up and see your wife Lucy. Seeing your giant beauty of a goddess wife filled you with happiness and even when you noticed all the shopping that clearly resembled why she was late to your guy's room. You would normally be in a ball of rage about something like that but at this moment you were just glad to see her. And it is unfortunate though that you have to see her from a stranger's back pocket. With being only inches away from her giant hand, You knew that you had to get her attention but with little ability to move, you would have to wiggle yourself up a bit, which you were able to and release your tiny arms and then you started yelling your tiny head off while still wiggling your out and towards your wife's giant hand.
Your wife for a brief moment actually started to hear a familiar voice and at the exact time she looked down towards the maid's butt. You were covered by a giant thumb, in which your wife just brushed off whatever she heard and the elevator opened for the 7th floor. You got to watch your goddess of a wife walk out of the elevator and to your disgust a guy saw all her bags and offered to help carry them to her room. And her not wanting to carry the stuff let him. Giving you a full view of your gorgeous wife walk away with another man, while you at this point are nothing more then pocket lint.
After that the maid made her way to her car and before she sat down, you were placed into a small purse and zipped up. She then made her way to her decent sized apartment. And when she was all showered up, she let you out onto her coffee table and you were finally given the opportunity to talk to your captor. Who you didn't want to come off to harsh to so you subsided your anger. And of course being in a different country and only knowing English. You just hoped that she spoke it as well as and you also didn't really know what to say so you just went with say "Hey, can you help me?"..
(Does she speak English and/or is she willing to help you?)
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