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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Animal · #1857956
You're shrunk and surrounded by giant animals. It's a dream come true and a nightmare.
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Chapter #5

Revenge Is Tasty

    by: The Black Man Author IconMail Icon
You shiver on the ground, eyes closed as you wait for the gargantuan hoof to land on you. You wait. Nothing happens. You open your eyes. A shadow looms over you. You look up. Your gaze is met by the giant muzzle of the doe. She has noticed you. You stand still, unsure of what to do. The doe begins to sniff. She is clearly trying to determine what you were. You hope she does not think you are vegetation.

Deer, however, are not as stupid as some humans think. The doe could clearly make you out as a human. Though she was used to humans being bigger she still could identify you. Too long had she lived in fear of getting a belly full of lead. Too many friends of her's had been shot down mercilessly by those filthy humans. Too great was the grudge inside her to ignore this human who somehow was below average size; below fear.

Your eyes meet the the doe's gaze. Somehow you sense a fire in them that tells you to run and indeed, you do. You run. You hear hooves thundering behind you. You try to make it to the undergrowth for cover. It looks as if you will make it. You are almost there. But the doe had only been toying with you. If she would have wanted to crush you instantly she could have. Her hate for humans, however, made her want to do something even more painful, to give the human a death it deserved. With lighting speed she jumps in front of you and lowers her head. Before you have time to react you run straight into the doe's open mouth. The jaws slam shut behind you and you land face-down on the wet tongue. The air is humid and deer smelling. You attempt to bash through the closed jaws, but all you achieve is a knock on the head. The doe laughs (the way deer do) at your futile attempt and quickly pins you with her tongue. She lets her tongue wash you with her saliva. She sucks on you and tosses you around. She rubs you against her slimy cheek and moans with sadistic pleasure.

Soon, the doe decides it is time for revenge and so tilts her head back. You scream for mercy as you slide into her gullet, but all you receive as an answer is an audible, "GLURK". Efficiently, you slide down the doe's esophagus still squirming. You just cannot accept the fact that your life will end inside the stomach of a deer. Inevitably, you come to the end of your slide as the welcoming stomach opens to you. A horrid smell fills your nostrils and quickly you end up splashing around in nothing else, but gastric juice. The liquid fills your mouth giving you your last taste; a disgustingly bitter taste. Slowly, you begin to feel as the corrosive acid eats away your skin layer by layer. You writhe in pain, but nothing gives you ease. The stomach begins to fill with mush which clearly is the doe's lunch. You spend the last, painful moments of your life as nothing more than a topping on a salad.

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The doe was satisfied. She had avenged all the poor deer who had fallen to human fire. Now, she also realized how good a human tasted to say nothing of the feeling of it sliding down her throat. Perhaps this was a sign from mother nature of a new era. An era where humans are inferior. The thought made the doe feel encouraged. For a moment she enjoyed the feeling of the human tickling her tummy. Then she began grazing, continuing her life as if nothing special had occurred.

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