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You wake up in equestria and have adventures with the mane six.
This choice: No way! Save her!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Twisted and Torn Mind.

    by: lol Author IconMail Icon
You didn't knew what it was that made you think THIS would be fun in the beginning, but you knew you had to help her.

The only problem with this was that you couldn't see a way through the flames. "HEY! You need too calm down! Can you see anyway you could get out of there with help from here?" You shout as loud as you can to make sure Zecora would hear you over the fire and her screams for help. You really wish you would know how to use magic now that your an alicorn.

"Thank Celestia you came! There is a window on the opposite of the door, but its blocked from the outeside by something! Please hurry! I is getting hard to breath in here!" Told Zecora you as you heard crashing on the in side of the hut and her coughs shortly after. She didn't seem to have seen you, but you didn't cared about that and ran around the house and saw what blocked the window.

A part of the roof that must have broken down when that bomb went off. It was surprisingly only in flamed in very few places. You tried to force it off the side of the hut but it didn't move a single inch. "It must be stuck somewhere." you though and looked the thing over and soon saw the problem. One of the roof supports was stuck in the gound and the window. Thinking fast you move to one side of the support and placed you hind hoofs between the ground and lower part of it. You dug your front hoofs in the gound before you and kicked it as hard as you could. Again and again you tried and finally it gave away. You gave it another strong kick and sent it flying. You quickly moved out off the way of the falling roof parts and saw that there was now a hole in this side which was probably even Celestia could fit trough with ease.

You looked inside to see that Zecora was already lying on the ground unconscious. You wanted to rush in and get her out, but something was holding you back. All of th sudden you doubted, what you are doing here. "Wait. Why should I risk my live for her. I don't even know her!" You started to think of all the reasons not to save Zecora, but you shook your head to get these thoughts out of your head. "How can i even think that way. I got her into this shit!" you said to yourself and rushed inside.

It was hard to see when you entered the hut cause of all the smoke and the flames. Still, it only took you a moment to find her and the reason why she was unconscious. She was carrying a bag with potions she probably wanted to save and then one of the shelvess fell from the walls and hit her. You moved up to her and somehow were able to pick her up and lift her over back holding Zecora in place with your wings. You ran outside and that no second to soon. Right as you exited through the hole in the wall, the hut collapsed and every thing still inside was lost in the flames which were raging even greater then when the bomb went off.

You ran as far away as you could before you're were feeling exhausted and set Zecora down. But suddenly your head felt like it was getting bashed in with a hammer. You broke down and held your head in your hoofs waiting for the pain to go away. "NOTHING BUT A FAILURE!" Was some deep voice, seeming to be enraged by something, screaming in your head. Instantly after that your head was feeling better.

You looked over to Zecora who seemed to recover and she was sleeping. You were wondering what you should do now.
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