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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fanfiction · #1902482
The girls of yu-gi-oh found a card that transforms the loser of a duel into another girl
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Chapter #4

Dark Signer Carly Carmine

    by: Aaa Author IconMail Icon
Carly waited for Jack silenty, patiently. Misty had provided her with her very own duel runner just for this. The more time she spent with Misty Treadwell, the more Carly firmly believed in the cause of the Dark Signers, the more she distrusted men, and the more she despised Jack Atlas. It had become complete when Misty had kissed, and she had eagerly kissed back, ready to begin a new life, a life where they were the most important, where Carly need not ever be ignored, and stepped over again. Every time, she whispered in Carly's ear, telling her that she deserved better, that she needed to take charge, that others should serve Carly, worship her.

As she waited, her thoughts turned to Jack. She had poured her heart out to the man, and all he could obsess over was himself, his own redemption. He hadn't truly changed, he was still as arrogant as ever, but now people loved him even more. It wasn't enough to just turn him into a Dark Signer, it wasn't enough to defeat him. She wanted to utterly humiliate Jack, to have Jack serve her, bow down to her as a Queen.

That was when the card revealed itself to her. In a flash of light, it came into existence in her hand. She had never heard of Girl's World, but the 500 ATK and DEF to female monsters would aid her immensely. The second effect would allow her to make her desires come true. A male duelist that lost while this card was in play would be transformed into a woman, and serve the wielder of the card. Cackling, she took notice as Jack finally arrived, still riding the Duel Runner she learned he had stolen from Yusei Fudo.

Jack had raced desperately, wanting, needing to know why Carly was a Dark Signer. He had assumed she had been a sacrifice to one of the Earthbound Immortals, until he saw her face under the hood. It hurt to see her like this, which was why he knew he needed to save her, to help her from whatever had happened. He arrived to find her waiting for her, a smirk on her face. "Please, Carly, I can help! Just tell me why! Please!" Jack begged. Carly only hopped on her own duel runner. "Duel me if you want to know so bad."

Jack started by playing Resonator Call, playing a monster face down, and two face down cards. Carly started her turn with Girl's World, Fortune Lady Water, and two face downs of her own. Jack's face down, Mad Archfiend, was no match for Fortune Lady Water. Jack returned the favor by using Powerful Rebirth to bring back Mad Archfiend, then playing Dark Resonator, and summoning his signature card, Red Dragon Archfiend. It destroyed Fortune Lady Water, leaving her with 2700 Life Points.

"You fell into my trap Jackie, I activate Inherited Fortune. During my standby phase, I can special summon two Fortune Ladies." She said cackling. She already had Fortune Lady Earth in her hand, and drew Fortune Lady Dark. She summoned the two, and then played Time Passage on Fortune Lady Earth. Due to Fortune Lady Earth's effect, Jack lost 400 life points each time she gained levels, taking 800 off of him. 400 for her regular effect, 400 for Time Passage.

It was over now. Fortune Lady Earth was at 4500 ATK, Fortune Lady Dark at 2900, Red Dragon Archfiend at 3000, and Jack only having 3200 Life Points left. "Please, tell me why Carly, before you finish me off, tell me how you're a Dark Singer!" Jack begged, accepting his fate. He would either become a sacrifice for Carly's Earthbound Immortal, or worse, be turned into a Dark Signer himself.

"Why? Because I poured my heart out to you! I love you, and you went off on some redemption quest! You're still as egotistical as ever Jack! When I found out what was going on between Signers and Dark Signers, how could I sit idly by? How could I just stay out of it! I went investigating that Arcadia Movement. The simple thing is that I found out the secrets your benefactor Goodwin kept secret, and that bastard Sayer pushed me out the window with his monsters! If not for the Earthbound Immortals, I'd have died on the street, but they gave me another chance! And now, to end this!"

Fortune Lady Earth attacked Red Dragon Archfiend, while Fortune Lady Dark finished the job, wiping out Jack's Life Points, crashing his Duel Runner and sending him flying into the ground. She stopped her duel runner, walking over to him, taking him in her arms and kissing him full force. This spurred on the changes within Jack. His hair grew out long and shiny, his lips became plumper, and his face rearranged itself.

Jack's entire body began to rearrange itself, with his Adam's Apple vanishing, and his larynx transforming. His chest pushing outwards, and his waist narrowing. His privates retreated inside, transforming and replacing certain parts, and soon he was completely a woman. Jack was no more, and instead Jade was here.

When she opened her eyes, Carly was delighted to see Jade had the Mark of a Dark Signer, and the whites of her eyes had turned black, with the red marks on her beautiful face. "How do you feel Jade?" Carly said, getting on the ground and crawling over to the newly made woman. "I feel like I've been asleep my whole life, and only now am I awake." Jade said, looking into Carly's eyes.

Carly couldn't deny she loved the feeling of power, the attraction between her and Jade. She placed a hand on Jade's check, smirking at the blonde, before leaning in and kissing her.

You have the following choices:

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1. Jade goes after Yusei

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2. Carly transforms Crow

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3. Misty, Carly and Jade take on Akiza, Yusei and Crow

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