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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1964714
Dr. Evans is a genius that has come up with a way to turn his patients into rich clients.
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Chapter #4

Brandon Thomas

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"Are you sure you're ok to go by yourself?" Mr. Lancaster asks Brandon, who nods his head. "Ok then, don't take too long and come back to us, we'll be in this room." he continues before the group heads into one of the checkup rooms.

Once Brandon has gotten inside the bathroom and is separated from the group, that's when Dr. Evan's makes his move, grabbing his cholroform and rag and quickly heads into the bathroom.

Just as Brandon is finishing up washing his hands, that's when Dr. Evans makes his move, subduing him and then carrying him off to his lab. "You're going to be one gorgeous pop star once the changes are done with you." he says.

He manages to sneak Brandon into his office where he has an oxygen tank set up that once the boy breathes from it, that's what will trigger the changes. "Just what kind of pop star though do I want to make you? How about someone of various ethnicities and backgrounds, that way you'll appeal to a much wider audience?" he decides.

Once Brandon is hooked up to the oxygen, he starts to release some of it, the young boy breathing it in and already, Dr. Evans can see the changes happening as the boy is starting to get larger in size, reaching 4' tall before he disconnects it. "That should be enough, the rest of the changes will work themselves out." he says before taking Brandon back to the bathroom, setting him down on the toilet to make it look like he was having to use it.

"And let's make his friends notice the changes too, that should make things a lot more fun." he says before returning to his office.

As the tour continues, the absence of Brandon is noted and Mr. Lancaster looks over at Brian. "Could you go and check on Brandon, make sure he's alright?" he asks.

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