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Finn finds himself in a alternate land of Ooo where everyone is fat and evil.
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Chapter #4

Begging for mercy

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"NOOOOOO!" Finn cried out as tears ran down his face. Seeing his little buddy get broken was unbearable even more than being flattened by Marceline. "Peebles, stop! I'll do whatever you want just don't kill BMO!" Finn pleaded. Marceline punched Finn for his insolence and warned him, "You don't get to tell Bonnie what she can and can't do. Go ahead babe, crush that turd."

Bubblegum hesitated not because of pity or mercy but because she saw this as an opportunity. "I almost forgot how much you care about this outdated piece of junk. So you're saying you'll do ANYTHING I say if I spare your little toy?" Finn solemnly nodded while the gears in Bubblegum's head turned. Marceline didn't know why Bonnibel was taking pity on Finn but had a feeling her lover was up to something. "Alright Finn, I'll spare BMO and even fix him up. In exchange, you have to serve us and do everything Marceline and I say. If you resist, neither of us will hesitate to destroy him. Is that clear?" BMO tried to tell Finn not to give in, that it wasn't worth it but with his speaker broken he couldn't talk. Finn sighed and once again nodded.

"Excellent, now gas him Marcy." Peebles instructed. From the look on the vampire's face she was more than eager to do so. She got off of Finn, allowing him to briefly get some air, only to take off her leggings and shorts exposing her fat sweaty ass to Finn. She grabbed the hero's head and shoved it between her cheeks til his nose was pressing against her musky asshole. "Nighty night hero." The vampire teased. She sent a blast of her rancid gas straight into his nostrils that overwhelmed the hero as his noodle-like arms and legs flailed about. The nauseating fart was too much causing him to pass out. Marceline let go and freed his head before picking him up and slinging him over her shoulder.

"So are you really going to fix that dumb computer or were you jonking with him?" Marceline wondered. Bonnibel picked up BMO and his pieces with a sinister grin. "Of course I am. I'm not sure why Finn is acting like his old self again, but you know as well as I do it is was near impossible breaking his will the last time and I don't want to go through with that again. Besides, there's no doubt that if we broke him Finn would never forgive us and keep resisting us for the rest of his life. By letting him surrender to us, we won't have to worry about him trying to disobey us. Besides, I think I can make some modifications to BMO that should benefit us." Marceline smirked as she started to understand what Bonnie was up to. "Youre so despicable, and I love it." She pulled the candy princess in for a long kiss and pulled away leaving a thin trail of saliva between them. "Mind if I take care of Finn when we get back?"

"You might as well. I'll be busy with BMO but I might take a break and check on you two." With that the two left with Finn and BMO not even thinking about checking upstairs for Jake. Once at the Candy Kingdom, the two went their separate ways. Bubblegum went with BMO to her lab while Marceline took Finn to her bedroom.
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