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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #2000212
Pick your major, pick your girl, and pick your doom
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Chapter #5

Susan

    by: Vintovka Author IconMail Icon
Olga holds your test tube aloft so that you can see your mysterious benefactor approach. The distorted light passing through the glass makes it hard to make out the figure, but as she gets closer the view normalizes and you nervously gulp. That bleach blond hair, light freckling and hazel eyes you'd recognize anywhere: it's Susan, a gym rat you dated for a short while and then abruptly broke it off with. You knew it hadn't ended well, but if she did this she must have taken it harder than you thought.

Susan approaches the test tube and centers you between her eyes, the abnormal view making them seem to wrap around you. She reaches out and aggressively flicks the glass twice, making it resonate with the impact of her fingernail and shaking you. "Is this really him?" she asks, her voice a low rumble. "For all I know you put an ant in there and took my money."

"He's smaller than an ant," Olga corrects, "much smaller. I have a magnifying glass if you'd like a better look, though I'd have to dump him out first. There's also a video of him shrinking like you requested, though I understand you might want to watch that at home." Olga hands her a magnifying glass and says, "Get ready."

Gradually Olga tilts your test tube over Susan's waiting palm, causing you to slide down toward the opening. You land on a vast peach field covered by interwoven furrows and a couple of long ditches, sprawled on your back. Olga pulls the now empty test tube away and it's immediately replaced by a magnifying glass. An enormous hazel eye fills the lens, and after it blinks a couple times she says, "Yep, it's him. Not much smaller than I remember either."

Susan lowers the magnifying glass and leans in, putting her mouth an inch above you. Her lips seem to stretch for hundreds of feet in either direction, dominating your whole sky. She opens her mouth, revealing a set of enormous, perfect teeth ringing her cavernous mouth. "Hi again," she booms, her warm breath covering you as she assaults you with sound. "You may have forgotten about me, but I didn't forget you." Her smile is completely malicious as it threatens to engulf your tiny form.

You have the following choices:

*Noteb*
1. She licks you

*Noteb*
2. She bottles you up to take you home

3. You start shrinking again

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