Nate is 7 years of age, with slim look and all. He’s a cheerful kid, always smiling and blushing when trying to be nice to everyone around. He loves having a 14 year old brother named Gavin by his side, and would love to play some games or watching TV together, and a young kid is having a blast.
But the only thing that Nate surprised recently is how much his brother gained so much weight for the past week or so. Gavin is slim just like his brother, and he would normally be at home sleeping overnight as it should be. But it was when Nate once checked his brother’s bedroom being opened and realised that he’s not here at all, and that caused himself to panic when something isn’t right.
But it then turned into every night as the same thing happened, but it’s when Gavin comes home when Nate realised his brother seems to be put on weight much more, and his body had gotten fatter each day. The kid looked shocked to see his brother’s appearance but didn’t want to disturb about the whereabouts. But then, this morning came, and Nate had been awakened by that thumping footsteps that are so loud, he never heard such force like that before.
“What is that noise? Where is that coming from?” Nate wondered, and he was right to be concerned.
The floors creaks he can hear from his bedroom, and Nate wanted to find out why. He would very quietly taking a pear through the bedroom door by just simply opening the door a little bit, and wanted to track down to the loud footsteps to hear where that comes from.
But that wouldn’t take long when he Gavin waddling through the lobby, and Nate looked so surprised in a shocked way that his brother had let himself big time. He now looks 500lbs of bottom heavy frame, and he has that underwear briefs on, so he can see the blubber of Gavin’s newly grown obese body, especially the teen’s fat but and thighs that are marked in cellulites.
Again, Nate tires to get unnoticed when his brother waddled past his bedroom door, and he had to take a look of his back, looking so plump and huge that it caused to jiggle heavily, and all that Nate could react is sheer awe and in disbelief, when Gavin is not out of sight from him.
“Whoa! He’s so big! But why did he always came home looking a lot bigger than he was before?” That’s a question Nate wanted to know, and he cannot wait this any longer.
He wanted answers, and so he would come out of his bedroom with his pyjamas, and follows his brother’s path to where he went. He doesn’t want to be sneaky anymore and and start to get curious about this situation he needs to know why. Of course he love his brother no question about it, and he’s also worried that Gavin is letting himself loose in somewhat, especially when he was not home in the middle of the night.
Eventually he reached to the room, and so he comes in and saw his 500 pound brother at where?  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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