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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #2285580
Fred catches the rare shrinking virus where only males are affected. Will he survive?
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Chapter #4

Maddy rubbed her foot on the ground out of reflex

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Maddy was drawing as she felt a slight tickle on her left foot. Out of reflex without using another thought she tried to stop the tickle and placed her foot to the left. "Oh god what's happening?", Fred thought as Maddy's giant foot started to move. He felt more and more of his arm buried under her warm and wet foot until he felt the fibers of Maddy's sock touch his head. In an instant not only his arm was under her foot but his whole body. All the light was cut off and he felt the weight of a truck on his body. He tried to breathe but the heavy weight on his chest prevented him from getting any air. The small bit of air which came in his lungs smelt rancid and extremely musky. How could his little sister's feet smell so bad? He must be between the ball of her foot and her toes where it's normally the smelliest. The extreme pressure compressed on his whole body gave Fred no big hope of survival. As Maddy still felt something under her sock, she used some force to rub her foot on the ground finally getting rid of the tickle.

Fred felt her foot moving again. The pressure grew, she seemed to rub her foot on the ground forcefully. Apparently it wasn't a good idea to tickle her foot after all. Fred felt his bones break, first his left arm, then a rib and a leg. The giant foot of this 8 year old girl rubbed him all over the ground without any remorse. He managed to catch one single last breath of Maddy's sweaty and smelly foot as his light went dim and he was nothing more than a crushed little blood spot on the sole of a little girl's foot. She drew for another half an hour or so and then stood up to meet her sister Phoebe.


"I think you stepped in something Maddy", said Phoebe. Maddy took her left foot in her hand and looked under it.

"Eewww you're right, poor little buggy, so that was tickling me.."

"Don't be sad, it happens.", answered Phoebe.

"I guess so...", Maddy pulled of her socks and threw them in the washing bin.

"And you needed to switch socks anyway, they reek up to heavens"

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