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Chapter #5

Too late! Something happens to you!

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From down the hall, you hear a loud continuous roar. You squint, trying your hardest to make out the source. There, turning the corner into the walkway is female who likes to be about 12 or 3, pushing a massive vacuum cleaner. And she's heading right towards you.

See, this is why you listen when the narrator says to hurry.

Forgetting any sense of danger from the doors, you start to run away from the machine. It bellows, sounding more like a hell-hound than a Hoover. There was no time for thinking, no time for rational thought. You simply ran along the pink carpet, casting occasional glances back to the kid and her beast. She was catching up, and you were running out of steam. At the end of the hallway, there was a single closed door. It was thin and had a tall opening at the bottom, likely belonging to a storage closet. If you could make it...

But, oh no! The plot demands drama, not success! Despite your best efforts, your ankle gets caught in the carpet fibers and you go down. "Shitshitshitshitshit," you say as you try to pull free from the threads. The machine was still approaching; you could feel the suction tugging you, pulling you in.

Slam! The door to your left slams open, and a barely clothed Cierra walks out. A bathroom, perhaps? "Rachel, can you go tell mom that we're out of clean towels." The vacuum stops as sister's chat. Seeing your chance, you pull free from the tangle and dash towards the door. But, which one?

You have the following choices:

*Noteb*
1. Run to the closet!

*Noteb*
2. Run to the bathroom!

*Noteb*
3. The little sister is walking right towards you.

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