This choice: The door opens, revealing a tired looking young girl • Go Back...Chapter #5The door opens, revealing a tired young girl by: MrNoNoseHair   You nearly leaped back in shock, you didn't hear the door open, so not only were you surprised to see it open, but you also were looking straight into the eyes of a young lady, looking as if she had just woken up.
There was a few moments of silence as you observed her and she you. She only had her head visible, so you could only see her dark raven hair that looked wild and unkempt like a bad hair day, covering one eye while the other seemed to have a brilliant gleam to its vibrant green color.
It only lasted a few seconds, but In those few moments, there was a full range of emotions that became evident in their change on the girls face.
It started out with an annoyed look, than confusion, then revelation, than became joy, than composer, than joy again, than embarrassment as she quickly shut the door in your face.
You just stood there in shock at what just happened, and made you wonder if what you saw was really there... or if your mind was playing tricks on you. Before you could do anything, the large doors opened up again, wider than before and revealed the dark haired woman, who looked to be in her early to mid 20's.
She still had her one eye covered, but in that time since, she had her hair combed and down, waving all the way down to her thin waist and some of it curling around at the very end. She wore a long dark purple dress that had a v cut in her neck line, revealing her a to maybe B cup sized breasts underneath the clothing, and the fabric hung all the way down to her knees, revealing long black stockings and a pair of white slip sandals, with large bows on them topped with a lovely green gem on the bows center.
She was fairly skinny, almost like a twig, but had enough on her to keep her bones from showing at least, so she didn't look maul nourished.
You also saw her eyeing you up, and seemed to like what she was seeing, and then beamed at with a large white smile and said "Greetings! Please forgive me for earlier... I was not expecting any kind of visitor, especially one as cute as you are!"
You blushed a bit as she gave a laugh that sounded a bit off. She stopped and waved her arm, ushering you to come in.
Not wanting to stay outside for much longer where the grave stones were, you head inside and the person went and closes the door behind you.
The woman than bounded in front of you and raised her arms in the air, as if presenting the large entrance room to you and said "Welcome to my home, the Resuscitate mansion, named so for the fact that this place has been brought back time and time again, never to stay down! My name is Renata Arman, and the mistress of this mansion and property!"
While the Mistress of the mansion seemed to be eited to show you her home, looking about, it seemed to be on the down low, dust covering everything and could see age etched into the walls and pictures seemed to be fading.
"Ermm... Okay, we are currently at a slow time... but this place was grand back in the day! And it isn't the first time its like this! And I'll be sure to make sure it gets to be revived again and become grander than ever!" Renata stopped boasting and cleared her throat "Sorry... Got a little carried away there." The raven haired woman than offers "Even in this state, I hope you are willing to stay, it wont be long before night falls and you don't want to be out in the forest when it gets dark... I would be more than happy to be your hostess, as I not gotten any visitors in a long time... I'll even offer you a meal and entertainment if it should please you! What would you say to that?"
You looked back at her and could swear you could see some desperation in her emerald eye that she was trying to hide, and kept her thin smile large, but could see a little twitch, as if trying to contain herself was getting difficult.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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