There are no grammatical, punctual or spelling errors I can see in this piece.
I actually think I like this poem better than any that I have read here on WDC. It is really good, congratualations from one writer to another. As a reader, I am amazed at the ways you put this across. The language is beautiful, the metaphors etc suit it perfectly and I am very satisfied with this poem. I cannot explain how much I really do like this poem, and I hope there are more like tis in your port.
Thanks for the fantastic read! Keep Writing.
Tara.

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