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Given: Oct 23, 2011 at 8:47pm
Length: 407 Characters |
407 w/o WritingML
I like this poem. It is light, airy, simple. The imagery is excellent and took some "thinking through", didn't it? The colored prism of broken glass is now only black and white since you know he does not love you. "The robin's lonesome song is full of woe" might make a little more sense here. Unrequited love is a very sad, emotional, mental state and you said that well with your "tangled thoughts".
You responded to this review 11/18/2011 @ 10:45am EST
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