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He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not Open in new Window. [13+]
Some times your first love is the wrong person, and your love is not returned!!
by Summer Wind is Healing Author Icon
Review by Casey Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I like this poem. It is light, airy, simple. The imagery is excellent and took some "thinking through", didn't it? The colored prism of broken glass is now only black and white since you know he does not love you. "The robin's lonesome song is full of woe" might make a little more sense here. Unrequited love is a very sad, emotional, mental state and you said that well with your "tangled thoughts".
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