First Response: Strong convictions and a deep divulgence into philsophical inquires which is admirable and worthy.

Characters: The inclusion of so much of the writings of Plato diverts from your writing and interrupts the flow and integrity of your piece of over borrowing from another. Inferences can be used but must be small and only include the most elite and necessary.

Spelling and Grammar: Punctuation needs to be mended, including periods and commas. "till the end " should be "Until the end". Plato and Socrates' names need to be capitalized. Some sentence structure can be severely benefited from remodeling.

Good Points: Strong conviction and articulation making the message and theme resonate and apparent.

Suggestions:"those who are easily satisfied, accept any statement as the true statement about an object, person, situation or hypothesis." could be better stated, "those who are easily satisfied; accept any statement as the true statement about an object, person..."

Overall: Intellectual and full of purpose, but could be presented and modified more beneficially.