First Response: Great, well written, detailed, psychologically probing.

Characters: Well identifiable and emotionally represented.

Spelling and Grammar: A few grammatical and structural errors.
"The abused became the abuser. A statistic. " should be "The abused became the abuser, a statistic."

Good Points: Inspires a strong remotional action and obviously created with a strong conviction.

Suggestions: Lengthen it, and deepen the emotions and descriptions to help the imagery.

Overall: Heart wrenching emotional piece, one of the highest ratings I've given due to the sincerity and articulate depiction of the emotional turmoil. Quite well written.