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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions in this poem.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences:

"Finally I have a sense of direction put forth"."
I look up to the sky, a kiss";"
"a" path that will undoubtedly bring more self-worth.
The arts, the expression of one's self"."
Hopefully","one day my works will be put onto the infamous book shelf."

-rhyming scheme was a little inconsistent



Emotion: Nice emotion!

Grammar and Spelling: There were some punctuation errors. Otherwise, nice work!

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this piece! This poem was very emtional, and the sentiment was touching. I thought this piece was well-written, and it truly expressed self-expression. The rhyming scheme was a little inconcsistent, and some punctuation errors were spotted throughout, Overall, this piece was well-done!

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Blessings~
Nataly del

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