Here I am, a NON POET, reading your poems as strictly a reader. I hope you get something out of my review. Please email me and explain anything you think I get wrong. I am trying to learn

I see you entered this in the same contest I did! It was interesting to read a different take on the form.


Is the poem interesting? Yes: a tribute to her husband
Does the poem sound melodic? This type of poem doesn't have any rhymes
Does the poem say something? Does it have depth? Yes, it mentions the deep love she has for her husband. It hints at the depth of her feelings.
Is the poem too abstract? Can you understand the message? No, this poem is not abstract, and the meaning is clear.
Does the poem have power or beauty or both? This poem beautifully conveys the poets love.
Does the poem contain common clichés?no
Do the words in the poem seemed forced to conform to the form or line syllable count? no
Is the poem's punctuation used effectively? yes
Are there any interesting words in the poem? I love the word amazing

You have a spelling error: sacrifices instead of sacrafices
Tessa
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