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Sin City Open in new Window. [18+]
A change of venue. (Struck By Lighting FF Entry, 2/20/08)
by Jeff Author Icon
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Review by blue jellybaby Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Reading*Initial hook: Hey! I wanted to come and offer you a review in honour of your tenth Anniversary here on WdC *Smile* I chose this piece primarily because of the title, I loved the film Sin City so I had to come check it out.

*Pencil*Storyline: This follows the story of a man (who remains nameless) who is cruising down the boulevard of Las Vegas. We think he's out for a cruise until his lust begins to take precedence and it's then that we realise that not all is as it seems.

*People*Characters: The main character at first comes across as a normal man, someone who hates the city and is trying to get somewhere. Slowly but surely, his inner desires come to light and we realise that the man we thought could have been normal is in fact deranged and dangerous. I think is done really well and draws the reader in before allowing them to realise that he's an animal.

*Home*Setting: This takes place in Las Vegas. The scene is set really well with a lot of description to draw the reader in to the scene and see it as he does. Seeing it from his perspective means we see the fake side of Las Vegas, the garishness of it all.

*Ghost*Atmosphere/tone: This is definitely a dark piece. His inner thoughts are revealed throughout the narrative and take the reader down a dark and twisted journey to his gratification. I love how it explores the inner workers of the human mind.




*Cut**Paste*I have no suggestions to make!



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Well done on a good write!!*Pencil*

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