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Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CHORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid.

Picture a villain finally in his secret compound and suddenly it becomes very hot.

The lava begins to make a statement.

'get out or else'

Even this villain couldn't fight against this situation.


EMOTIONAL CHORD STRUCK:

The last line is funny.

As it has been said countless times locations is everything.

You can't do villain stuff when your 'house is in disorder.' Right?


TONE: Good depth of feelings.

Good job


SPELLING ERRORS:


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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