Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I feel optimistic when I read this piece. There are soul mates or at least spirits who have walked together many times. It affirms my belief structure. My favorite line is the mystic universe had first created a plan for the saddened heart. That line is the perfect illustration of the idea that the universe has a plan but in this form of existence, it's hard to understand it.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I absolutely would. It's a beautiful reminder of the endless power of true love. Sometimes, life does set people on separate course of events and it can be hard to go with the flow of it but teaches us so much when we do.

Was there a clear purpose to it?

At the end of our life, we have the relationships we built in the world around us and there is great purpose in that.



Glows:

This piece whispers lovingly to my soul. I love that you started and ended with a songcatcher tune. A sweetheart song in the in the soul of Sister Moon, beautiful line!



Grows:

None



Miscellaneous Comments:

I wonder what the inspiration is. Star crossed lovers like Romeo or Juliet or more constant that can withstand the disruptions and discord in this life? Either way, it was a beautiful reminder of romance of the spirit.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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