This was very creative. It was a great use of of the prompt. What were you thinking while creating this piece? Was this piece hard to create given what you to write about? The event that you created on this on this fateful evening, how did you find out about it? Or how did you create the event?
I understand that this just a fiction of your imagination but I think the even lengthening the prompt to a short story would make a great continuation about this event. The ending was peaceful for some and could have been made out to be worse for others, I like it that everyone could have had a different experience with the day.
The flow of the poem was logical and simple. The flow made sense. The use of placing the stars and sky with humanistic characters helped the subject come alive with the descriptions you used. The descriptions also made it seem like there was a mystery that needed to unfold or one needed to find out.
Thank you for writing this, it is a really great piece of poetry. I enjoyed reading this piece.

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