Hi 1UppyEar ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

Now this is an interesting turn of events! In the previous chapter we met Tess and her family. Now we share her confusion as she wakes up and everyone believes her to be Rosie. Her looks are different. She is 23 instead of 36. The lady who must be her mother is kind, but where is her own mother? Where are her husband, her children, her dog? On top of that, there is technology that she has never heard of, and the USA has a different President. It makes for an intriguing scenario.

Suggestions:

As with the previous chapter, I have no suggestions. I couldn't find any typos, or errors, or anything that was unclear. It's very well-written.

Characters:

Rosie/Tess - Rosie, who we knew as Tess in the first chapter, wakes up in the hospital. The last thing she knew, she was where we left her, in bed after a long day. Now, it is believed that she had a car accident. That she is someone different. She looks different. Her age is different. Naturally, she is very confused.

For the reader, it is interesting. It raises many questions. Did Tess end up in a different reality? There are some hints of that. Or was Rosie indeed in a coma, and did she dream up Tess?

Side characters - There are some interesting side characters in this chapter. The doctor, the nurse, above all Rosie's mother, who seems lovely. They all add to the story.

Storyline:

I sure didn't see this one coming, after the previous chapter! It's a huge twist. I like it, though, and you have done an excellent job with it, properly exploring the confusion of the main character, and all her doubts and fears.

Wording:

The wording is well-chosen and suited to the piece. It made for a pleasant read.

Presentation:

You have used a pleasant layout, that is easy on the eye, thank you!

My Rating:

An excellent, fascinating chapter. You have done a great job!

I had no suggestions. So, this is another 5 out of 5 for me!

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .