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| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Creeper Of The Realm  PLOT - While dreaming, a pregnant mother has a conversation with her unborn child, preparing them both for the lessons they will teach one another throughout this lifetime together. SETTING - The mother's ideas of how things are supposed to be, what is proper, and how she will teach her daughter shows that of someone with a closed mind. After learning this about her, it was easy to picture what her life must be like, and how she interacts with other and carries herself. CHARACTERS - The soul of the unborn child, knows the tasks set out before them, and knows that they both have lessons to learn. The mother who seems confused about what lessons her daughter will teach her. GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE - Since this was entirely dialog, it flowed so well. As a reader, you are hooked into the conversation right from the beginning, as if being the reader you are learning right along with the mother's character. THOUGHTS - I too hardly remember my dreams, but when I do they always have something specific to teach. This was a well thought out short story. I believe that this is how things go, from one life to the next, learning, growing, our souls abundance to lead us down certain paths that may even seem foreign to us. You did this one beautifully. Very eye opening, sweet, yet the message is clear and who better to give us eye opening wake up calls, than our children? Nicely done. Write on!   
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You responded to this review 07/16/2016 @ 11:01am EDT