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 | The People Upstairs  [18+] Grandma's got a poltergeist, and it may just be the answer to David Sullivan's problem...  |
| (5.0)| NOVEMBER 21, 2016 Hello Mr. Kane --- Thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item" I took a few pauses to thoroughly enjoy your traditional length short story, THE PEOPLE UPSTAIRS. Great title! This is indeed a clincher. You've appropriate setting --- Long Island. Family tie and characters, Grandmother, David and even Dolon --- whose concluding phone call ends the tale in an endearing type compliment as if a payback to the Sullivan family. OF: The people upstairs, those invisible mites whom harass the kind old lady, who even cooks for them -- using the hostess card here is quite an addition -- the unplugged TV, reminiscent of Steven King's STORM OF THE CENTURY -- all combine with fine plotting, step-by-step fortitude making this one a true keeper. Good Luck in the contest. Cordially, TEFF "Invalid Item"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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