Hello!Sally

I went to your port and pick this poem. I found that you are really a great poet. I am reviewing you now for “The Earth Day Contest”.

First impression: A lovely poem. I like the way you put your feelings into word. I could imagine where they are.

The poem: I like the beautiful nature picture you painted here. Ploughed fields, bird song, bright light, fireflies all things blended together create a beautiful natural picture. This poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words.

Theme and creativity: Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. The tone of this poem is soothing that kept me reading your poem to the end.

Favorite Lines:
" Pouring on to highlighted streets,
Tempting golden shadows everywhere.
Pockets overflowing with sugared waterfalls.
Little daily miracles scatter through Fall"

Suggestion: I didn’t find any mistakes. You used punctuation marks where they are needed.

Overall: I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing. It’s a wonderful poem
These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  

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