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Wake Up! Open in new Window. [13+]
The Earth needs us. It's not too late. (Form: Quatrains) An Earth Day Challenge Entry
by 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon, the description of the Earth Day poem aroused my curiosity.

The poem follows the quatrain form and looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the emotions of fear and depression forward at a good pace.

The fourths stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme on eyes and lies. I also like the metaphor in the last line of this stanza.

I encountered no distractions. I am giving this thought provoking poem a 5.0 because of the message it contains. Write on.

Everyday is Earth Day!


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