The poem looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of fear forward at a good pace.
The last stanza is my favorite because it contains the most emotion.
I encounter no distractions. I enjoyed reading this thought provoking item. I am giving this poem a 5.0 because of the way it express emotions while showing the plight of Earth. Write on.
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