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 Review #4319776 |
  Happy Earth Day Dave!   Wow! This is a delightful creation and attractive on the page. The acrostic letters forwards and backwards is interesting. The Acronet form is new to me and it is amazing how well is flows together. It is interesting that the first verse addresses the audience with imperative or direction and the second one more narrative telling of the vivid coming of spring. Your images are clear and I like the idea of erasing "ghost of muddy March"! The vocabulary was well chosen especially to contrast the "gloom" and the bright "bursting"!  The use of poetic techniques like assonance, alliteration and consonance help the flow and pleasing soundscape when I read aloud.  I enjoyed the words like "supplied" tulips, lilies, lilacs". Thanks for sharing this well conceived and inspiring vision. I really enjoyed the effective crafting of this form. Light on the path as you write on! |
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You responded to this review 04/26/2017 @ 12:10pm EDT