Hi slez, I am reviewing your story "Starting Over" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story is about a guy name Lou and his friend Corwin. One day Lou's friend asks him to help fake his death, the two go back and forth. Corwin attempting to get Lou to agree to help fake his death, and Lou trying to dissuade him away from the idea.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short seems to be well written, I do not have suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common spelling or grammar mistakes.

♥ Overall: This was a fast and easy read. Honestly, the short had a supernatural feel to it. It became very prominent towards the end when Corwin said that he'd faked his death once before, about seventy years ago. That particular ending left the reader wanting to know more? And asking the question of, who is Corwin? or rather what is Corwin?

I enjoyed this short, and I look forward to reading more from this writer.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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