Hi Jacky, I am reviewing your story "A Little Help" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story is about a mental patient named Jake. Jake has D.I.D Dissociative Identity Disorder. As Jake is sitting there he attempts to get a needle through a piece of thread with his other identities trying to help and offer his advice. It is later discovered through both Alex and Fred who I am assuming are his doctors or lab technicians that Jake was actually trying to poke his belt robe through the handle of a pitcher.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short is well written I did not spot anything amiss, I have no specific suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This author has done it again with the crazy patients! I enjoyed Jake and his "other" personalities. Thank you so much for writing this short. I look forward to reading more of your work.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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