Hi Christianna, I am reviewing your short story "Imagination Day" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC. ♥ This short story is about the day of August the sixteenth, but this is just not any other day its, Imagination Day! This day in particular is a day that everyone is allowed to use their imagination all day long. They can become anything that wish to be on this particular day. Anything. ♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short seems to be well written I have nothing to suggest to you at this time. ♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not notice any spelling or grammar errors. ♥ Overall: This short story was a fun little number to read, and the imagery that it provided allowed me to believe that this was an actual day, and if it is not, someone should make it into one! I honestly feel like this should be a a new contest on writing.com. Thank you so much for sharing this short story with us. I look forward to reading more of your work in the very near future. This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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