Hi T, I am reviewing your story "Thunder Island" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ *Fans self rigrously* This short sizzled. The brunette's lust was written cleanly all over those pages. I loved how she teased herself at first, but she knew that it was not enough. She needed that hard male flesh of a lover that she trusted. I really enjoyed this sexy little story. Wow!

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short is well written. I have no suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors, but I have a commacities and I felt that a comma or two in some sentences would not hurt.

♥ Overall: This was a sexy story to read, and when the woman's lumberjack finally came upon the scene the pages went from smoldering to an inferno in two point five seconds. Thank you so much for sharing smoldering short with us. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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