First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Martha Allison's age. The description are part of the action and move the narrative forward at a good pace. The action kept my attention.
What I like: I like the description of the billy goat's confrontation with the store owner. I like Martha Allison because she showed the calmness and fortitude of a strong woman.
Suggestions: My only suggestion is, if you have more stories about this woman write them.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this wonderful story because of the way Martha dealt with the goat. Write on.
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