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ruwth is writing... Open in new Window. [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Beauty and The Beast..." Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi ruwth Author Icon,

I am Lorraine and I am reviewing your piece "ruwth is writing..." Open in new Window. in affiliation with "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window..

Title: I think the title is what it is here! It's a poem regarding Beauty and the Beast, so the title fits!

First Impression: I'm glad this is the item that was the one posted before my entry in I Write! I always worry that it's going to be an item I'm going to struggle to review, but this is far from it. I really enjoyed reading it, and it brought a smile to my face. What more could I ask for?

Form: I'd never heard of The Minute Poem form before, so I got a little side-tracked exploring the form. I understand it's an 8, 4, 4, 4 syllable count, and I double-checked this for you, and you nailed it, so well done here! Sometimes syllable counts can be tricky, you can get tripped up over certain words, but no such thing happened here. Great job!

Word Choice: On my first read-through, I'll admit I thought the wording was a little bit simplistic. Once I'd read it through a few more times, though, I actually liked the simplistic language. It fit the tone and subject of the piece, because, at the end of the day, this is a children's fairytale.

Spelling/Grammar: No errors spotted here!

Closing Thoughts: Sorry I couldn't offer anything constructive in this review. I just enjoyed it too much, and couldn't point out a fault! Keep writing, ruwth, and hope to see you around "I Write in 2019" Open in new Window. again! *Smile*

Lorraine


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