Hey there, Cadie reviewing for Erotic Language. I hope this finds you well.
You are a talented writer. You wrote for the assignment, you provided an erotic version and a pornographic version.
Personally, I would remove the "and" at the beginning of each paragraph. If you read the prompt continuing with the paragraph; it doesn't flow right.

Well done though. Thank you for sharing, and Keep writing!


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .